Helena Posted September 7, 2019 Report Posted September 7, 2019 I really enjoyed this first chapter great job I can't wait to read more Quote
Guest Posted September 8, 2019 Report Posted September 8, 2019 (edited) Great chapter Maddy working at the same hospital same time Kyle happened to get injured in prison Update again soon Edited September 8, 2019 by Kristen Quote
D.B Posted September 8, 2019 Report Posted September 8, 2019 Oh, I really like the premises of Maddy working in a hospital (rather unique idea). I felt a bit sorry for Kyle being abandoned at the hospital yet again, but it'll be good to see Maddy looking out for him. Can't wait to see more! Quote
Suzza101 Posted September 8, 2019 Report Posted September 8, 2019 Great chapter Like Maddy working at the hospital. And how Kyle happened to go to that exact hospital. I hope Kyle will get better soon and I wonder who beat him up! Looking forward to reading more! Quote
Summer's Bay Posted September 9, 2019 Report Posted September 9, 2019 I dont know any of the newer characters, but ill definitely be reading this because I liked your last fanfic. Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted September 13, 2019 Report Posted September 13, 2019 On 07/09/2019 at 18:55, Helena said: I really enjoyed this first chapter great job I can't wait to read more On 08/09/2019 at 01:58, Kristen said: Great chapter Maddy working at the same hospital same time Kyle happened to get injured in prison Update again soon On 08/09/2019 at 08:15, D.B said: Oh, I really like the premises of Maddy working in a hospital (rather unique idea). I felt a bit sorry for Kyle being abandoned at the hospital yet again, but it'll be good to see Maddy looking out for him. Can't wait to see more! On 08/09/2019 at 10:02, Suzza101 said: Great chapter Like Maddy working at the hospital. And how Kyle happened to go to that exact hospital. I hope Kyle will get better soon and I wonder who beat him up! Looking forward to reading more! Thank you, all of you! That was the easy bit. Maddy was meant to be training as a nurse in the show and, as with a lot of these ambitions, she never actually got to the end of it, but I don't think her accident would rule her out, so I like to think she'd get back to it once she'd done her travelling the world thing.It is a huge coincidence for Kyle to end up there but hey, I needed a story! On 09/09/2019 at 03:47, Summer's Bay said: I dont know any of the newer characters, but ill definitely be reading this because I liked your last fanfic. Thank you and I hope you enjoy! I'm aiming to get the next chapter up some time tomorrow. 1 Quote
Helena Posted September 14, 2019 Author Report Posted September 14, 2019 I'm so glad that Kyle is awake and doing better I can't wait to read more Quote
D.B Posted September 15, 2019 Report Posted September 15, 2019 It's great to see that Kyle has woken up and I loved the bit when he said he decided to report the drug dealer because someone died (that sounds like the Kyle I know and love), but apparently even now he's not out of danger just yet if some of the guards were involved. It looks like Maddy will have to do her best to look out for him then! Also, two moments really stood out: the small mention of Oscar, whom I'm glad to see is still remembered, and also the other nurse 'Cassandra'. I'm presuming intentional on your part? Great as always, I look forward to your next update Red! Quote
Guest Posted September 16, 2019 Report Posted September 16, 2019 Great chapter great Kyle is awake and talking to Maddy. Update again soon Quote
Summer's Bay Posted September 17, 2019 Report Posted September 17, 2019 (edited) Good stuff here. Why does Maddy have an artificial arm? Edited September 17, 2019 by Summer's Bay Quote
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