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On ‎12‎/‎10‎/‎2019 at 22:10, Suzza101 said:

I found it really sweet how Kyle asked to kiss Maddy. After what happened last time, I’m sure he was surprised when she said yes. I do think they’d be cute together. 

Yeah, they needed to acknowledge that and he needed to get consent first this time.I'm glad you like them!

 

On ‎12‎/‎10‎/‎2019 at 22:10, Suzza101 said:

I think it was a good idea for Kyle to tell his brothers to stay away but I have a feeling that they won’t for too long. 

 

On ‎12‎/‎10‎/‎2019 at 23:19, Helena said:

I'm glad that Kyle phoned brax

 

On ‎13‎/‎10‎/‎2019 at 02:37, Kristen said:

Good Kyle called Brax

I think we were at the point where a simple "Don't call them" wouldn't be enough to explain where they were, so I needed that chat between Kyle and Brax.

 

On ‎12‎/‎10‎/‎2019 at 22:18, Summer's Bay said:

Maddy is risking a lot for Kyle...

She is, yes, how will that go..?

Hopefully I'll get another chapter up later today!

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On ‎19‎/‎10‎/‎2019 at 22:36, Helena said:

Oh dear that's a terrible decision to run from the police I had a feeling that the receptionist would phone the police can't wait to read more

 

On ‎20‎/‎10‎/‎2019 at 11:23, Kristen said:

I agree with above it’s a terrible decision to run from the police.

 

On ‎20‎/‎10‎/‎2019 at 23:12, Summer's Bay said:

Maddy Maddy Maddy you just put yourself in a whole lot of trouble girly...

Well, it's kind of in for a penny, in for a pound now. (Or should that be "in for a cent, in for a dollar"?) Maddy had already been seen with Kyle so she was going to be in trouble either way, and this keeps Kyle away from anyone who might be working for the people after him.

I will aim to get another chapter up tomorrow!

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Great chapter.
 

That was so close but this is not good now they are really being followed!

i hope that they’ll be okay but how is this going to end? Kyle can’t go back to prison he’ll be killed! But he will have to!
 

I don’t think it was a good idea to run from the police.

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