Ludub Posted August 30, 2017 Report Posted August 30, 2017 On 29/08/2017 at 22:29, Red Ranger 1 said: Phoebe's probably lucky that Brody's mind control has kicked in. Expand It would be a very handy trick to have, wouldn't it? I mean, you could definitely get yourself out of a lot of messes, even if it was just getting someone annoying like Phoebe to buzz off and leave you alone? Maybe being a vampire isn't all bad? On 29/08/2017 at 22:29, Red Ranger 1 said: I'm guessing Brody hasn't really killed his entire family but he does have four bodies on his hands. Expand On 29/08/2017 at 22:55, ~JarlieFanEver~ said: Whoa does it look like Brody had killed his whole family?? Expand On 29/08/2017 at 23:22, Kristen said: oh no did Brody just kill his whole family? Expand On 29/08/2017 at 22:57, pembie said: I was quite worried about Justin and Tori there for awhile but Its a trick right right? Expand Maybe he did and maybe he didn't... You'll have to wait and see On 29/08/2017 at 22:57, pembie said: I thought he might just kill him. Or leave him there screaming bleeding to death Expand I'm not that cruel, am I? On 29/08/2017 at 22:29, Red Ranger 1 said: This lifestyle is going to take some getting used to! Expand Haha! True! Very true! 1 Quote
bijou Posted August 31, 2017 Report Posted August 31, 2017 Wonder how Brody will react when he finds out Morten was behind his rendezvous with Kris and that's why he found him "interesting" 1 Quote
Guest Posted September 8, 2017 Report Posted September 8, 2017 Great chapter can't believe Brody killed his whole family. Morten is not a very nice character not liking him at all. Update again soon Quote
bijou Posted September 8, 2017 Report Posted September 8, 2017 Hmmm Morten is no Edward Cullen more Leatherface with Teeth instead of a chainsaw I do have to say though I am rather entertained with the story you're doing a great job 1 Quote
pembie Posted September 8, 2017 Author Report Posted September 8, 2017 I knew Morten was dangerous but my jeepers creepers a psychotic vampire who is very skilled with a meat cleaver and owns a pack of vicious dogs Somebody should send Dracula the memo that his now become the little pussycat compared to big bad scary Morten (runs away screaming and hides under the bed) Sigh now I have stay here until tonight until someone comes a knocking on my door Hopefully they don't have fangs Good chapter spiked up the fear levels 1 Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted September 8, 2017 Report Posted September 8, 2017 Well, I guess feeding them to dogs is one way of getting rid of inconvenient bodies...Morten came across as a bit of a simpleton here but maybe the Sesame Street act is for Brody's benefit.And not looking good for Kris, not that I'm that bothered...Looking forward to more! 1 Quote
Ludub Posted September 8, 2017 Report Posted September 8, 2017 On 08/09/2017 at 04:27, bijou said: Hmmm Morten is no Edward Cullen more Leatherface with Teeth instead of a chainsaw Expand On 08/09/2017 at 08:00, pembie said: I knew Morten was dangerous but my jeepers creepers a psychotic vampire who is very skilled with a meat cleaver and owns a pack of vicious dogs Expand On 08/09/2017 at 03:54, Kristen said: Morten is not a very nice character not liking him at all. Expand On 08/09/2017 at 15:04, Red Ranger 1 said: Morten came across as a bit of a simpleton here but maybe the Sesame Street act is for Brody's benefit. Expand Yeah, I kind of see Morten as this horny teenage boy, (a frustrated and angry virgin), who ended up a vampire against his will and has gradually gone a bit insane. If he wasn't a vampire, he'd most likely be a rapist or a serial killer, or both! It's important to remember that he was a teenager when he was 'made' so he never got to mature at all. He's also not a native English speaker (he's Norwegian) so the slightly stilted speaking style might also make him sound a bit dim. But, yeah, Red, you kinda hit the nail on the head. He's not the brightest, but in some ways that makes him more dangerous! Glad you're enjoying it I'm having a lot of fun writing it. Quote
pembie Posted September 8, 2017 Author Report Posted September 8, 2017 (edited) Morten If he wasn't a vampire he would be a rapist or a serial killer Yes well that very much sounds like one of your stories But I do love them Norwegian eh I have been giving him the wrong accent Edited September 8, 2017 by pembie Quote
Ludub Posted September 8, 2017 Report Posted September 8, 2017 On 08/09/2017 at 17:20, pembie said: Norwegian eh I have been giving him the wrong accent Expand Haha! What accent were you doing?! Quote
pembie Posted September 8, 2017 Author Report Posted September 8, 2017 On 08/09/2017 at 21:24, Ludub said: Haha! What accent were you doing?! Expand Transylvanian accent I really shouldn't type cast all my vampires Quote
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