Guest Posted December 20, 2016 Report Share Posted December 20, 2016 Great chapter I hope Phoebe will come around and warm to Ash/Kat. Update again soon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ranger 1 Posted December 20, 2016 Report Share Posted December 20, 2016 Hmm, things still seem awkward between Phoebe and Brody... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ludub Posted December 20, 2016 Report Share Posted December 20, 2016 Loved the exchange between Justin and Phoebe. It really sounded like them, and I like that he didn't put any pressure on her. (I love Brody and Justin because they're a breath of fresh air when it comes to male characters on this show. They're both very grounded, reasonable people who treat their friends and family with respect). Enjoying the fact that you're writing them true to character here. Bit of awkwardness between Brody and Pheebs there at the end. Interested to see what happens. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
aussie fan Posted December 20, 2016 Report Share Posted December 20, 2016 I don't blame Phoebe. Kat and Ash shouldn't of deceived her. I think we all know she can keep a secret. Raffy and Eie's relationship is so cute. But I don't think I trust their friends. They seem like trouble. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted December 21, 2016 Report Share Posted December 21, 2016 Great chapter I don't blame Phoebe for not being happy about Ash/Kat. Ellie and Raffy are so cute. Update again soon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inactive User Posted December 21, 2016 Report Share Posted December 21, 2016 Great chapters Can't blame Phoebe for beginning not happy about Ash/Kat Liked Raffy and Ellie's relationship-so cute Loved Phoebe's song at the end and liked how Justin praised her for singing Update soon please xx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted December 21, 2016 Report Share Posted December 21, 2016 Great chapter Liked Phoebe's song at the end wonder who she will choose. Update again soon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ludub Posted December 21, 2016 Report Share Posted December 21, 2016 Just caught up on the last 2 chapters... Continuing to enjoy the way you write the Morgans, particularly Justin. I think you've really captured his tone and turn of phrase. Again, nice to see that he's not pressuring her, and waiting for her to make up her mind. Loved his bit with Tori (they have a great relationship!) Liked that Ash and Phoebe can be friends and that he genuinely wanted to help her with her Justin / Brody worries even if he didn't turn out to be much help at all. Quite funny that Phoebe thinks writing a song is going to help her make up her mind! Matt and Ellie continue to be very cute together, as do Hunter and Olivia. Looking forward to the next chapter x Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
christine king Posted December 22, 2016 Report Share Posted December 22, 2016 10 hours ago, ~JarlieFanEver~ said: Loved Phoebe's song at the end and liked how Justin praised her for singing 9 hours ago, Kristen said: Liked Phoebe's song at the end wonder who she will choose. 6 hours ago, Ludub said: Quite funny that Phoebe thinks writing a song is going to help her make up her mind! Thanks guys, that song is part of an original song that I wrote myself, so thanks for sharing your opinion on my song writing, next chapter will be up soon. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted December 22, 2016 Report Share Posted December 22, 2016 Great chapter I hope Phoebe forgives Kat/Ash for deceiving her. Evelyn and Matt are cute together as are Hunter and Olivia. Update again soon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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