Guest Posted May 5, 2016 Report Share Posted May 5, 2016 (edited) Great chapter Uh-oh Peter found out Hunter burnt Leah's house down. I look forward to more Update again soon Edited May 5, 2016 by Kristen Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ludub Posted May 5, 2016 Report Share Posted May 5, 2016 Great chapter. Loved the scene with the teenagers downstairs. Oscar was pretty funny. Glad they're all getting along so well. Also loved the scene at the start with Leah and Zac in bed. Very sweet. They're so cute together. Looking forward to the next chapter x Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
InfantryAlex Posted May 5, 2016 Report Share Posted May 5, 2016 1 hour ago, Ludub said: Great chapter. Loved the scene with the teenagers downstairs. Oscar was pretty funny. Glad they're all getting along so well. Also loved the scene at the start with Leah and Zac in bed. Very sweet. They're so cute together. Looking forward to the next chapter x I'm just wanting some happiness. I want them to be able to get through everything. Leah deserves someone permanent in her life, and I think her and Zac suit each other. Thank you, for the comments and the support! Calm before the trouble, I say! Thanks for reading, too! 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inactive User Posted May 6, 2016 Report Share Posted May 6, 2016 Great chapter Gonna love Oscar! He is so funny, lol. Loved the scene with the teenagers Update soon please xx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted May 6, 2016 Report Share Posted May 6, 2016 Great chapter Loved date night until Peter almost ruined it. Uh-oh Peter's not going to give up on being mad at Leah. I wonder if the person will go through with kidnapping Zac or not. I look forward to more. Update again soon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ludub Posted May 6, 2016 Report Share Posted May 6, 2016 Great chapter! I love how affectionate they are with each other. It's lovely to see Leah and Zac so happy together, but as we all know, Leah never gets to be happy with anyone for very long! Someone needs to wrap Zac in bubble wrap before the Leah curse comes into force lol! Liked Ricky standing up for them too, that was nice. I'll be interested to see who you come up with as the kidnapper. Ah that Peter, always bad news! What does Amanda see in him? Looking forward to the next chapter x Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kathrine french Posted May 6, 2016 Report Share Posted May 6, 2016 (edited) Peter not good leave Zac and Leah alone. Edited May 7, 2016 by QUIET ACHIEVER Capital letters for names and punctuation. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
InfantryAlex Posted May 6, 2016 Report Share Posted May 6, 2016 5 hours ago, Ludub said: Great chapter! I love how affectionate they are with each other. It's lovely to see Leah and Zac so happy together, but as we all know, Leah never gets to be happy with anyone for very long! Someone needs to wrap Zac in bubble wrap before the Leah curse comes into force lol! Liked Ricky standing up for them too, that was nice. I'll be interested to see who you come up with as the kidnapper. Ah that Peter, always bad news! What does Amanda see in him? Looking forward to the next chapter x Stop it! I'm already worried about that! I want them to last, and I want them to be happy. I'm trying to think of a potential 'shocker' kidnapper. But I honestly don't know who. Might need to alter the warnings on this too. :3 Amanda was never that cool in the show, I remember. But this, she's nice. God, can't have them both being evil! Thank you, update again tonight. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted May 7, 2016 Report Share Posted May 7, 2016 Great chapter Peter ruined the date night glad they went home. uh-oh at the person kidnapping Zac. I reread last chapter this one is meant to be Chapter six. I look forward to more. Update again soon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
InfantryAlex Posted May 7, 2016 Report Share Posted May 7, 2016 1 minute ago, Kristen said: Great chapter Peter ruined the date night glad they went home. uh-oh at the person kidnapping Zac. I reread last chapter this one is meant to be Chapter six. I look forward to more. Update again soon Ah, my sleepy brain is failing to keep up with chapter numbers. I will edit it now, thank you! Yeah Peter did, but they tried to finish it, but Leah was annoyed at the 'rat' comment. Thank you, will update again tonight or tomorrow. Probably tomorrow, I struggled with this chapter. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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