Guest Posted May 11, 2016 Report Share Posted May 11, 2016 (edited) Great chapter I don't like Peter in this fanfic and the way he's forced Holly to fall for Zac again I look forward to more Update again soon Edited May 11, 2016 by Kristen Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
InfantryAlex Posted May 11, 2016 Report Share Posted May 11, 2016 22 minutes ago, Kristen said: Great chapter I don't Peter in thus fanfic and the way he's forced Holly to fall for Zac again I look forward to more Update again soon He isn't meant to be nice in this fic, and I haven't decided how it's going to end. But thank you for the support. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ludub Posted May 11, 2016 Report Share Posted May 11, 2016 Great chapter!!! I love love love Zac and Leah in this. They're so lovely together. I'm glad Zac was able to walk the path with Leah's support Nice that the kids are happy for them. Is it weird that I don't really want Wayne to be found out? I kinda just think he's been used by Peter and seems a little lost and confused. Ooh, evil Peter! Can't help feeling sorry for Holly. She's really mixed up and she's being sent in like a lamb to the slaughter. What does Peter have over her mother I wonder?! Looking forward to the next chapter! xxx 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
InfantryAlex Posted May 11, 2016 Report Share Posted May 11, 2016 3 hours ago, Ludub said: Great chapter!!! I love love love Zac and Leah in this. They're so lovely together. I'm glad Zac was able to walk the path with Leah's support Nice that the kids are happy for them. Is it weird that I don't really want Wayne to be found out? I kinda just think he's been used by Peter and seems a little lost and confused. Ooh, evil Peter! Can't help feeling sorry for Holly. She's really mixed up and she's being sent in like a lamb to the slaughter. What does Peter have over her mother I wonder?! Looking forward to the next chapter! xxx I am glad you loved the Leah and Zac scenes. I mean kids should be nothing BUT happy for them, plus who couldn't smile at how happy they were? In love got to rely on eachother, and it's the tests to come to test their limits. I don't know, have to wait and see. Yeah I feel sorry for Holly too, I just read her history. But Peter does have something over her mother, so her mother will make Holly do it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted May 11, 2016 Report Share Posted May 11, 2016 (edited) Great chapter It could get interesting now that Holly is back. Oh Oscar you have a dirty mind I was confused by holly's mums name I thought it was Mandy well it was in last chapter and I can't believe Peter is manipulating Holly and her mum. I look forward to more Update again soon Edited May 11, 2016 by Kristen Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
InfantryAlex Posted May 11, 2016 Report Share Posted May 11, 2016 (edited) 3 hours ago, Kristen said: Great chapter It could get interesting now that Holly is back. Oh Oscar you have a dirty mind I was confused by holly's mums name I thought it was Mandy well it was in last chapter and I can't believe Peter is manipulating Holly and her mum. I look forward to more Update again soon Oh crap, I didn't realize I had named her! I'll go and edit the name nows Posted chapter Fifteen before I quoted you! Edited May 11, 2016 by ZacxLeah Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted May 11, 2016 Report Share Posted May 11, 2016 Great chapter I can't believe Holly is going along with Peter's plan. I look forward to more Update again soon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
InfantryAlex Posted May 11, 2016 Report Share Posted May 11, 2016 1 minute ago, Kristen said: Great chapter I can't believe Holly is going along with Peter's plan. I look forward to more Update again soon Thank you! Sorry about the confusing name! Haha, been edited now. Will double-check to see if I've missed any of the changes. All comes down to what Peter knows.. Thank you so much for your support. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ludub Posted May 11, 2016 Report Share Posted May 11, 2016 This is all a bit of a mess really isn't it?! Holly being forced to come on to Zac, and poor Zac having to fend her off when he's still a bit shaky. Not fun. I wonder what evil Peter knows about Holly's mum? Hmmm, interesting ;-) Again, love how affectionate they are with each other. And I absolutely loved the bit with Oscar in the previous chapter. He's a little too interested in what goes on behind Leah and Zac's closed door! Think he needs to get some action of his own. Still... pretty funny! 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inactive User Posted May 12, 2016 Report Share Posted May 12, 2016 Great chapters Poor Holly! Wondering what Peter does know about Holly's mum Looking forwards to the next chapter xx 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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