Shezza Posted November 30, 2011 Report Share Posted November 30, 2011 OMG I can't believe you left it there That is so mean . I definitely can't wait to read more now. Great chapter I am glad Charlie contacted Brax but I can't believe she is about to stuff it all again because she is too scared and proud to say what she feels. Please, please, please update really soon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inactive User Posted December 1, 2011 Report Share Posted December 1, 2011 Amazing update More soon xx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
soph1303 Posted December 1, 2011 Report Share Posted December 1, 2011 Great update, Ugh, I hate Hayley !! Glad Brax got rid of her!! Hehe Brax must be feeling pretty stupid about his Charlie/Jack assumption !! Wow good cliff hanger!! Take him back Charlie !! More soon please Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LaylaK Posted December 2, 2011 Report Share Posted December 2, 2011 Chapter 15 “I love you,” She blurted out; it wasn’t a decision merely a statement. But it was enough for him, for now anyway. He noticed her body shaking, she was weak, vulnerable just the way she had made him so many times. Afraid of what she might say next Brax placed his thumb on her quivering lip “I love you to” He said easily almost matter of fact. Sensing the doubt in her face he placed his lips on hers, the feeling was an incredible sensation through his body it had been to long since he had last touched her and though the racing of his heart was deceiving it was comforting, it was right. He pulled back allowing himself to breathe allowing her to take everything in “Brax..” he heard her say as she started shaking her head but before she could continue he grabbed her face both hands placed on his cheeks “One more chance, its all I want. Let me in” He whispered almost begged. She listened to his words they were convincing, she contemplated could she really handle him in her life? Then could she handle being without him? The situation was perhaps a catch 22; both could bring her happiness or heartbreak. It was with that on her mind she knew she had to take a chance she let her mind lapse as she reached up and kissed him. Her kiss wasn’t as soft and loving as his, it was urgent and passionate like it was convincing her it was the right choice. She felt him unbalance at her sudden movement towards him once recovered she could feel him return the urgency as their tongues’ circled in each others mouths. He moved his hands down to the arch in her back pulling her up against his muscular body, she had missed the embrace of his rather large arms around her small petite body, it was safe, secure and god damn sexy she felt. She pulled away to catch her breath and absorb the high he gave to her every time they were together the feeling she had been craving for what seemed like forever. He knew what she wanted and he was the only person in the world that could give to her. Brax slowly laid her down on the bed, being careful almost afraid that his sudden movements would scare her away. After a moment of silence Brax delicately began undoing the zipper on her jumper, placing his hand on her bare stomach he began to make patterns all the way up to her chest and back down to her waist. Each time he gradually moved each side of the unzipped jumper of her body until her breasts were revealed. He slowly began to kiss them making his way up her chest to her neck and then to her lips intensely kissing her. He pulled himself back not wanting to make her uncomfortable, he looked in her eyes waiting for her reaction, it did not take long as she pulled him closer to her body. Words were not longer needed as she slid his shirt of and he removed the rest of her clothing, Brax then pulling her on top of him in awe of the site in front of him allowed himself to get lost in the magnitude of this moment with the woman he most desired. Charlie lay there trying to catch her breath as she watched him use the blanket to remove the sweat from his face. “Wow” was all she could manage at the time, though both body and mind thought it was an understatement “Your telling me” Brax agreed as he lay back down next to her. “I need a drink” She gasped her heart continuing to race, it seemed to a be common effect of being in his presence, he groaned unhappily at the thought of having to get up but did so anyway. Charlie placed her dressing gown on as Brax wrapped a towel around his waist. Noticing the attention upon him, he looked at Charlie flashing a cheeky smile at her, Charlie allowed herself to return it. Perhaps everything is going to work out she thought to herself as she followed him to the kitchen. Charlie placed herself on the bench as Brax reached into the fridge grabbed some juice and poured them a glass. She watched as he made his way over between her legs, smiling looking straight into her eyes it made her nervous a good nervous. She felt him place his hands on her hips as he began to kiss her neck slowly and seductively his lips now cold Charlie moaned a little before jumping at the shadow flicking the light on. Both of them turned immediately to find Jack standing at the kitchen entrance. “Jack” Charlie hissed shaking a little from the shock “Sorry I was thirsty” Jack said rubbing his eyes “So you would be the famous Brax? Am I correct?” Charlie watched Brax become a little embarrassed “Yeh that would be me” “Jack” She heard her friend say holding his hand out to Brax “Yeh I’ve heard a lot about you” He shook Jacks hand Charlie watched his face go red at the thought of his past assumptions “Not as much as I have you” Jack replied Charlie watched the almost awkward introduction as each of them stood their ground she rolled her eyes typical males. However she watched on as there was also alliance between the two formed due to their love for Charlie. Jack finally went to exit the kitchen breaking the silence he said, “Charlie it’s late you know you have a shift tomorrow don’t you?” He asked, “Yes dad I am well aware of that” She said sarcastically, “Just checking thought you might of forgotten with all the loud moaning and bed squeaking going on this in house” He smirked and laughed as he ducked the juice bottle flying towards his head. Brax lay awake in bed in the early hours of the morning; he couldn’t sleep, not that he wanted to. If Brax knew anything about his relationship with Charlie it was the uncertainty of it all. She could wake regretful and push him away again, or she would wake content, grateful at her decision and perhaps grant him another day that she would remain his, his lover. In the end all he knew was to take it one day at a time and cherish every moment with her. Brax heard his phone go off, he quickly answered it not wanting to disturb Charlies sleep “Brax” The person on the other line spoke almost instantly, he recognised the voice “Riley? Why are you ringing so early? Where are you anyway? I heard you got out last week” He asked curiously “Yeh been laying low, got myself into a bit trouble before I got out” Brax shook his head at his troubled friend “But that’s beside the point, a few of Jakes boys got involved with some of the bikies in jail. Now Jakes socialising with them on the outside to” Brax couldn’t really see the point of this early phone call, everyone socialised with bikies in jail, even Heath had, it was a way of survival Jake probably thought he was missing out. “Yeh thanks Riley but couldn’t this have waited another 3 hours, I’m really tired” He replied to his friend. “Brax your not listening” He heard the urgency in Riley’s voice “They’ve put a hit out, you need to leave the Bay” Brax thought there was something strange going “Are you serious Riley?, Jakes been trying to get me for years, I’ve done pretty well I think” He laughed a little “Its not for you Brax” He was curious now “Then who could it be for? Heath?” He asked knowing well his younger brother could look after himself fine. “Charlie, Brax. Its for Charlie” He instantly became enraged at the thought “If you leave she lives. That’s all I know. I’ve got a ticket to Bali if you care to join” Riley offered him “Is this your number?” He asked using every inch of strength in his body to remain calm “For today it is” Riley replied. “I’ll contact you later” He said hanging up the phone. Brax looked over at Charlie, his aggravation ceased as he watched her peacefully sleeping. He knew things would never be easy in life, but he felt that this was just all too cruel. He sighed as she stirred in her sleep, not really expectant of an answer he asked, “Want to run away to Bali? Just you and me right now?” Brax sat there in silence until he heard her speak “ In 10 years when we’re married Ruby doesn’t need me anymore.” She mumbled, making Brax laugh at the thought had she really said married? He felt defeated as he tried to decipher choice he had to make. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Danni02 Posted December 2, 2011 Report Share Posted December 2, 2011 Aww Chax Awesome stuff Loved the stuff with Jack in the kitchen! Dont like the sound of the ending. Hope everything works itself out though! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
once_upon_a_mind Posted December 2, 2011 Report Share Posted December 2, 2011 Awww bittersweet!! So glad she relented so sad they may have to split again. Update soon please, really enjoying this story! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inactive User Posted December 2, 2011 Report Share Posted December 2, 2011 Great chapter Awwww Chax Don't like the sound of the ending More soon xx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
soph1303 Posted December 2, 2011 Report Share Posted December 2, 2011 Great update, Glad that Chax finally got back together !! Haha Jack's whole part in that update was awesome !! Really not liking the sound of that ending !! More soon please Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
homeandaway13 Posted December 2, 2011 Report Share Posted December 2, 2011 Love this fanfic and i can't wait to see what happens next so update soon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
leylaa; Posted December 3, 2011 Report Share Posted December 3, 2011 I just read through all that, and I must say this story is great! The Jack scene in the kitchen was great! haha. But, I don't really like the ending of that chapter, but hopefully it all works out. Oh, and we almost have the same names, and initials! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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