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Elijah “Good lord Jesus Christ and banish the holy ghost Heath where in Gods name are your clothes?

Oh God, I love this fic! That was the funniest line I have ever read! :D

I have no idea how you write like this but ooh this is hysterical! :D

Loved it!

& I think you will know when to end it...

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Oh, the story is really going mad now, Heath trying to cover up his werewolfism and howling at certain times! And Elijaah thinking Maz is the werewolf :lol: :lol:

Well done, can't wait to see the next parts and of course the climax (to the story of course!)

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:lol:

Marilyn at the beginning being horny & Sid meeting her needs as well a bit later :wink: That was hilarious.

Dex saying that Indi had said Heath was an animal in the bedroom & Sid saying that it's good that Indi has a healthy sex life! :lol: Quite disturbing for a dad to say that about his daughter though! :lol:

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“Good lord Jesus Christ and banish the holy ghost Heath where in Gods name are your clothes?"

That was so funny! What a classic line that is now.

Absolutely fantastically written as always so well done.

Another great update & I just loved how hilarious it was.

Love Carina xxx :wub:

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Been reading this over the last few days and damn, it's funny.Heath as a werewolf, Elijah as a superhero and all the sarcastic asides about the show:Charlie being unprofessional, Indi being a sucker, Ruby going after anything with a pulse.Looking forward to reading the rest of it!

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Oh hahahahah! Heath eats Romeo! Finally, he wins Indi! If only this would happen in the series.

So funny Pembie: Elijah and Sid wanting a cat fight, Brax scaring Coleen and Marilyn, Dex perving over Heath. A good old giggle :)

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