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Oh man poor Lilly having that clever little trick played on her, thinking she had to go to school. Very funny :D Even more as she is too full to eat her sweets because of the ice cream. :lol: It looks like its going be a fun day out on the beach for the family. :)

Update again soon. :rolleyes:

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Missing his heart :( that line is perfect! It just sums up Rola!

They are such a fiery and passionate couple and it genuinely breaks my heart to see it fall apart. Even though I knew it was going to happen it still breaks my heart to read it. To see them as a shadow of their former selves. However you have put them through so much so there has to be light at the end of the tunnel. I loved the story and I look forward to more of your writing! Still can't believe this was the first Rola story I read and from then I became a Rola addict! All because of your writing. You should be proud of yourself and the story. I know I am! Well done!

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