brady! Posted March 13, 2010 Report Posted March 13, 2010 Story Title: Change. Type of story: Short/medium fic. Main Characters: Charlie, Ruby. Minor Characters/Character Mentions: Doctors, Xavier, Angelo, Nicole, Annie. BTTB rating: G Genre: Family, Hurt/comfort. Spoilers: No. Is this story being proof read: No. Warnings: No. Summary: When Ruby is diagnosed with cancer, both her and charlies lives are changed. Hey guys this mightn't be good but i'll give it a go. the first chapter isnt long but the next few will be longer. Rubys p.o.v "You have cancer.” Three words that changed my life. I have heard a lot of three words during my life, “I love you” “I hate you” “You are grounded” “Go to hell” but when I think back at it now, they really don't matter. “Ms. Buckton do you want me to call a family member?” asked the doctor. I heard what he said but I don't think my brain, my tumor filled brain wanted to accept it. Then it went black. Charlie's p.o.v "I love you." Three words that changed my life. I've heard those three words a thousand times but when my daughter said them, my world changed. I never thought she would forgive me, miss me, need me and love me again after I lied to her but things change I guess. I like change. "Ms. Buckton this is Abbey creek hospital, we have your daughter, she fainted.” "Why? How?” "As you know, Ruby's results were back today about the tumor...” My world changed.
Red Ranger 1 Posted March 13, 2010 Report Posted March 13, 2010 Yay, you've started it!Really interesting idea, looking forward to seeing where you go with it.
twinkletoesjess Posted March 13, 2010 Report Posted March 13, 2010 Three words that changed my life. I have heard a lot of three words during my life, “I love you” “I hate you” “You are grounded” “Go to hell” but when I think back at it now, they really don't matter. I really liked that part. I really like the idea of this. I cant wait to see where you go with it.
Inactive User Posted March 13, 2010 Report Posted March 13, 2010 Ohhh interesting start. Looking forwards to read more of this fanfiction
callyha Posted March 13, 2010 Report Posted March 13, 2010 you started it! good opening. more soon please
tessalove Posted March 14, 2010 Report Posted March 14, 2010 Ohhh! Im liking it! Really good idea! El x
lollypop Posted March 14, 2010 Report Posted March 14, 2010 Wow...really good opening and a great way to draw readers in. I'm intrigued. Please update soon. I can't wait to read more.
brady! Posted March 14, 2010 Report Posted March 14, 2010 Here's the next update Rubys p.o.v My world changed in 6.6 seconds. One second I was Ruby, next I was tumor Ruby, then I was unconscious Ruby. When your unconscious it feels like you are drowning in the darkness. I could hear the doctor and nurses voices but I couldn't see them. In a few weeks maybe months I won't be able to hear and see. I won't be able to do anything. "Ruby, Ruby if you can hear me open your eyes." Said a doctor in a monotone voice. Charlies p.o.v Ruby has a tumor. I never thought I would have to say that. I expected to cry instantly when I heard but I didn't physically. When people think of tears they think of someone having tiny droplets streaking down a face but my tears are different. My tears stream down the inside of my body until they reach my heart. My heart begins to drown tear by tear. "Hi Ms.Buckton. Ruby's right this way." I followed not really knowing what to expect from now on.
lollypop Posted March 14, 2010 Report Posted March 14, 2010 Nice update. I really liked you described the inner feelings of Ruby and Charlie. Plese update soon.
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