Red Ranger 1 Posted January 24, 2010 Report Share Posted January 24, 2010 I'm really loving this story.It's full of scenes of complete normality but then you get little scenes like that one in the Diner in which that normality is shockingly interrupted.Liked the way you wrote Colleen, it felt exactly right.Eden is shaping into a real cutie and liked the little conversation between Aden and Nicole. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
amz89 Posted January 24, 2010 Report Share Posted January 24, 2010 OMG I loved this Poor Aden he is adorable. Cant wait for more =] Glad ur feeling better. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Scotcaz22 Posted January 25, 2010 Report Share Posted January 25, 2010 Great update! I just loved the banter between Aden & Nicole, just the right amount of humour in a sorta of an emotional story. Can't wait for the next update! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
matticus01 Posted January 25, 2010 Report Share Posted January 25, 2010 I loved it, Jax pretending to be sick so he could get out of school was a little funny! Aden and Fliss's relationship is just I love the fact that they have a tradition, spending every thursday together and having tea. That Diner scene was wow... heart breaking, suspense, emotional. loved every second of it, update soon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Georgia Posted January 25, 2010 Report Share Posted January 25, 2010 Great chapter I love how Aden and Belle have a routine to stick to, and despite what's happening, they are trying to stick with their normal lives. I have a feeling that it will just get worse for Aden from now.... Update soon. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xknomex Posted January 31, 2010 Report Share Posted January 31, 2010 omg that beginning... WOW!!!!!!! i forgot i would need tissues!!! so heartbreaking, I dread to think what it would be like to have those kinds of dreams... just makes me angry that some people can do that to people! you wrote it sooooo just WOW!!! seriously, i dont know why you were worried about this chapter its amazing! incredible! AOL at Aden and Jax! so so so so so cute! I hope Aden gives Rachel a call... and i hope Aden stays in that house! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Red Ranger 1 Posted January 31, 2010 Report Share Posted January 31, 2010 Loving the whole family dynamic you've built up for them.It's good that Aden's agreed to go and see a counsellor and he's going to try and work through this. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
matticus01 Posted February 1, 2010 Report Share Posted February 1, 2010 wow... amazing.... that beginning almost made me cry Belle and Aden are perfect, and Jax is the most adorable kid ever Fliss is also cute, its a shame that Aden is going through this again, but at least he's agreed to get some counseling again update soon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
amz89 Posted February 2, 2010 Report Share Posted February 2, 2010 To beautiful, such a beautiful family, cant wait for more =] Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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