amz89 Posted January 17, 2010 Report Share Posted January 17, 2010 Just read the first two chapters I love it. Poor Aden. Can't wait for more. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Georgia Posted January 17, 2010 Report Share Posted January 17, 2010 Amazing start to the story. I saw this in the Advertising thread, and I had to come and have a read ! Eden sounds adorable, and I'm glad to know that everyone is happy. Aden and Belle have such a stong, loving relationship, and it's a pleasure to read about it Can't wait for the next update ! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xknomex Posted January 17, 2010 Report Share Posted January 17, 2010 WOW!!! *wipes tears away* just WOW! that was unbelievable... you captured the emotion and fear Aden felt perfectly!! The way He reacted was just hearbreaking, and poor Jackson not understanding what was going on... i wonder if they'll tell him about everything now. Also the fact that Aden's grandfather recognised him! that ending had me in floods, i can't wait to see what happens next.. I think i need to stock up on tissues by the next chapter. AMAZING ELLEN! x Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hitmanfan Posted January 17, 2010 Report Share Posted January 17, 2010 OH, um what can I say? just WOW! And you were worried about how writing angst would turn out - it this is an indication, it's going to be brilliant!! oh poor Aden, so heartbreaking, I wonder how this revelation is going to effect Jax and thier relationship? can't wait Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ranger 1 Posted January 17, 2010 Report Share Posted January 17, 2010 That was a really good chapter, the emotions involved were striking and Aden's reactions pitch perfect. I'm not sure if telling people about Aden's past is a good idea, it might make things harder for him to lose that control.Really looking forward to seeing what happens next. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
amz89 Posted January 17, 2010 Report Share Posted January 17, 2010 wow is all i can say, love our u wrote the emotion, can't wait for more. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Georgia Posted January 18, 2010 Report Share Posted January 18, 2010 Well, I'm speechless. That was so sad, and now Aden's secret is going to become public knowledge. I feel so sorry for him, Belle and their children. It's going to be hard to cope with this. Update soon. x Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inactive User Posted January 18, 2010 Report Share Posted January 18, 2010 Whoa this is really good! So touching and powerful, emoticonal! More soon please Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
matticus01 Posted January 19, 2010 Report Share Posted January 19, 2010 Oh my... That was ever so powerful, and emotional! and... BRILLIANT!!! You captured every emotion, every piece of fear perfectly and I was almost in tears. I cant wait to see where this goes update soon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xknomex Posted January 19, 2010 Report Share Posted January 19, 2010 OMG... that beginning.. woah. You made me cry again!!! lol you wrote Aden's thoughts so amazingly! like WOW! and it made sense, what he was feeling! the talk with Jackson as well... well the beginning of the talk, the hug... had me in tears. I'm so glad he didn't hurt him. also, the use of the nickname, so clever!!! the last line, Brilliant! LOVING this fic soooooo much! x Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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