tessalove Posted November 24, 2009 Report Share Posted November 24, 2009 Poor Belle! She must be feeling terrible!! I hope things work out for her as best as they can!! El x Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ranger 1 Posted November 24, 2009 Report Share Posted November 24, 2009 Oh gosh.Another really good update, you could tell exactly what they were both thinking and feeling.I think it would probably be all right to let Aden have a relationship with his child but I can fully understand Belle not wanting him near her.This is a really good story, I can't wait for the next update. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
adellejefferiesxox Posted November 24, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 24, 2009 Awwww pooor Belle That chapter was really well written. I loved how you wrote Belle tellling Aden she was pregnant Update soooooon. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
matticus01 Posted November 25, 2009 Report Share Posted November 25, 2009 woah! thats all I have lol... woah... update soon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
valli Posted November 25, 2009 Report Share Posted November 25, 2009 I wasn't planning on reading this fic, at least not now (usually prefer reading fics that are already finished, as I hate getting to a certain point and then not being able to read the end ), but I accidentally read the last line of chapter 2, I think it was, when I was checking this thread for double posts and the like, and that was enough to make me read more. That says a lot about you as a storyteller, because it only took one line to get me hooked. Anyway, I really like how you describe the characters' emotions. You have a nice balance of showing and telling - meaning that you don't always write how the character feels, but also show it by having them responding in certain ways to different situations. It adds variety to the story, which makes it a more interesting read. I also really like the relationships between Aden and Belle, and Belle and Nicole. You can tell that Aden is remorseful for what he's done and on one side he respects Belle's decision to keep him at a distance, but at the same time you can sense that he desperately wants to fix things. But then again, that could just be me reading too much into it As for Belle and Nicole, I really like how supportive Nicole is and how Belle is starting to realise that there's a side to Nicole that she doesn't know, which will hopefully make their friendship even stronger, and Belle really needs Nicole's support at the moment as she can't rely on Aden. Whoops, got a bit carried away there Anyway, can't wait for the next chapter Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HeavenForbid Posted November 25, 2009 Report Share Posted November 25, 2009 Oh that was brilliant! I can completely understand Belle not wanting to allow him around the baby after what he did. You feel bad for him because he knows he has made a huge mistake! Update soon, can't wait to see how this goes in the next chapter. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
adellejefferiesxox Posted November 27, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 27, 2009 Awwww Belle, Aden was drunk he'll never hurt you again, forgive Aden and let Aden be there for the baby Poor Belle .... flashbacks Gooooood update. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
amz89 Posted November 27, 2009 Report Share Posted November 27, 2009 aww poor belle. That was great georgia, more soon please. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
matticus01 Posted November 27, 2009 Report Share Posted November 27, 2009 that was so powerful Georgia! Poor belle... I ca understand where she is coming from in a way... i wont delve into that but I can sort of understand not being able to control something even though you want to! And honestly, Nicole needs to step back and look! update soon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tessalove Posted November 27, 2009 Report Share Posted November 27, 2009 Aww, I feel reall sorry for Belle, I hope she is able to get rid of the memories, or just sort things out! Update soon! El xx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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