adellejefferiesxox Posted October 27, 2009 Report Share Posted October 27, 2009 Nicole going to bed at 1 pm Oops, my bad! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Georgia Posted October 27, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 27, 2009 Loved the chapter The shower scene... And Aden... was kind of gross Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mbi615 Posted October 27, 2009 Report Share Posted October 27, 2009 (edited) Wow, you update quick Steph! Really enjoying these last two chapters. Aden, Aden, Aden... getting drunk at 1PM is so not cool. Aww, it's just too hard not to love Geoff and Belle, they're so cute together! Edited October 27, 2009 by mbi615 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ranger 1 Posted October 27, 2009 Report Share Posted October 27, 2009 Big awwww.Geoff and Belle fooling about in the shower and then her asking him to stay with her at night...I loved every bit of their scenes together.Drunk Aden.Yep, had a feeling he wasn't going to take it well.Glad Nicole turned him down...at least for now...Loving this fic, can't wait for more of it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ranger 1 Posted October 28, 2009 Report Share Posted October 28, 2009 Looks like Belle's not having an easy pregnancy.Some more cute moments between her and Geoff.Not really sure about her behaviour with Aden, whether she wants him as a friend or something more.Not really fair to string Geoff along if it's the latter.Loved Geoff needling Colleen. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
matticus01 Posted October 28, 2009 Report Share Posted October 28, 2009 I kinda agree with RR1.... I dont know what she wants from Aden, and if she really loves Geoff as much as she's making out she does... and whether or not she's stringing both men along! anyway great chapter, update soon ;) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
amz89 Posted October 29, 2009 Report Share Posted October 29, 2009 WOW so sorry I've missed 2 updates. I loved them, cant wait for more. Im liking adelle. more soon please. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mbi615 Posted October 30, 2009 Report Share Posted October 30, 2009 Very funny how Belle actually believed and tried out Colleen's myth! Poor Belle, she's really struggling. And I agree with RR1 and Bec, Belle really needs to make up her mind with who she really wants to be with. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ranger 1 Posted November 2, 2009 Report Share Posted November 2, 2009 I actually really liked that chapter.I loved the opening conversation between Geoff and Belle, with their confusion spilling out.I liked the way you wrote Aden as well, with him seeming genuinely upset about how things had worked out between him and Belle.It's a shame Geoff hasn't felt his babies kick though and I get the feeling he's not as ready for fatherhood as he'd perhaps like to be. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
matticus01 Posted November 2, 2009 Report Share Posted November 2, 2009 I agree with everything RR1 said. you wrote the dialogue really well Steph Well done and I cant wait for more Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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