Georgia Posted October 13, 2009 Report Posted October 13, 2009 That was a really great start, and I can't wait for the next chapter Steph Oh, and I love the top line of your signature. Update soon. Quote
matticus01 Posted October 13, 2009 Report Posted October 13, 2009 beautiful first chapter steph I liked Aden's conversation with Irene, they need more interaction on the show liking this... update soon Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted October 13, 2009 Report Posted October 13, 2009 Interesting start, looking forward to seeing where you go with it.(Although...Belle had a fling with Geoff when she was 16?Wouldn't he have been, like, 14 at the time?Or is he older in this fic?) Quote
Georgia Posted October 15, 2009 Author Report Posted October 15, 2009 Loved the Naden and Adelle reference Another brilliant chapter Steph, I love your fics. Update soon. Quote
matticus01 Posted October 15, 2009 Report Posted October 15, 2009 haha.... that comment “Naden doesn’t sound as good as Adelle” just made me cack! brilliant update Steph update soon Quote
John Posted October 15, 2009 Report Posted October 15, 2009 Nicely written Steph. You're going to have to revise how you write Annie with all her recent character development. Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted October 15, 2009 Report Posted October 15, 2009 Nice update.Loved the whole conversation between Belle and Annie.Am I to take it from Belle's reaction to Geoff that Something had already Happened by that point? Quote
tessalove Posted October 15, 2009 Report Posted October 15, 2009 This is very good! I loved the ship names being used!! Hehe! Update soon! El x Quote
mbi615 Posted October 16, 2009 Report Posted October 16, 2009 Wow Steph, this is a brilliant fic! I love how you've included some humourous parts to a somewhat serious story. Aden cried himself to sleep. I'm sure Belle will soon realise that Aden is her one true love and they will get back together. Geoff and Belle... Anyways lovin' this fic, please update soon! And the quotes at the start of each chapter are great! Quote
Georgia Posted October 16, 2009 Author Report Posted October 16, 2009 But .... they belong together... Steph, it isn't too late to edit the chapter... my eyes are welling up... you ended Adelle Now that that little bit is out of the way, I'll tell you what I thought of this chapter..... It was brilliant Steph. “Okay just do something for me then, tonight I want you to look up at the stars, and then I want you to try and count them all. There’s billions and billons of stars out there, I miss you that much. When you go to the beach, try to count every grain of sand. I trust you that much. When you go in the water, try and count each drop of water in the ocean. I need you that much.." That was just... “Look when I was in the diner today and I heard someone whisper your name I turned around to see who it was and I was alone. Then I realized that it was my heart telling me that I miss you. Why can't I have an Aden ? Update soon Steph Quote
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