Barbara Posted October 4, 2009 Report Share Posted October 4, 2009 I remember reading the description of your fic and reading about someone committing suicide. And I'm not suprised it was Nicole who killed herself. You could see she found it much more difficult to move on. I'm definitely not saying the other girls found it easy but at least, they talked about it and let people in. Nicole didn't talk about it. I hope they find the second attacker soon. He has to pay for what he did. A young girl killed herself because she couldn't live with what he had done to her. Poor Belle! David abused her and got her pregnant. I'm glad Aden will be there for her. She'll need his support. More please. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rocknroll Posted October 4, 2009 Report Share Posted October 4, 2009 OMG!!! nic's dead! i dont believe she took her own life! your a really are a talented writer! update soon xx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ranger 1 Posted October 4, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 4, 2009 Just read those two chapters.End of the first one didn't look good for Nicole and...it wasn't.Almost overshadows what's been happening to Belle.Nicely written, this fic has been going to some really dark places without pulling any punches and is all the better for it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HeavenForbid Posted October 5, 2009 Report Share Posted October 5, 2009 Brilliant update I feel so bad for Belle. And I have a feeling that was about her at the end... I hope it wasn't though... Dying to know who the other person is, still! And you wouldn't wanna know who I'm thinking now A senior member now lol I'll just have to wait and see anyways. I wonder what is up with Martha, jealously maybe? Please update real soon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Barbara Posted October 5, 2009 Report Share Posted October 5, 2009 Belle isn't coping very well, is she? I know she didn't want to keep the baby and I can't blame her but I'm scared she might still regret it at some point. Is she the one taking a pill at the end? Could the accomplice be Liam? He hasn't been mentioned in this fic so far, I think. Whoever it is he must be quite a bit older than 18 from Charlie is saying? More please. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tessalove Posted October 5, 2009 Report Share Posted October 5, 2009 Oh! I can't wait to find out who it is! Your an amzing writer! I love this fic! Poor Belle! I feel so sorry for her! Update soon! El x Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ranger 1 Posted October 5, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 5, 2009 I have...absolutely no idea who that is but I'm glad they've caught him anyway.I was also wondering if that was Belle taking the pill at the end and hoping it's not as serious as it seems.I can understand her having an abortion in the circumstances, it would be hard on her either way. Not sure what it was you didn't understand about my comment, I was referring to the previous two chapters if that was what confused you.I was trying to say that the fiction has touched on some serious matters and hasn't shied away from showing the consequences of them which impressed me. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Georgia Posted October 6, 2009 Report Share Posted October 6, 2009 Bec, that was brilliant. I have the same feeling as Barbara about the accomplice, but I'm not too sure. And Belle having an abortion.. I think that's one of the few reasons were abortion is ok. Bec, again amazing writing Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
matticus01 Posted October 6, 2009 Report Share Posted October 6, 2009 I have...absolutely no idea who that is but I'm glad they've caught him anyway.I was also wondering if that was Belle taking the pill at the end and hoping it's not as serious as it seems.I can understand her having an abortion in the circumstances, it would be hard on her either way. Not sure what it was you didn't understand about my comment, I was referring to the previous two chapters if that was what confused you.I was trying to say that the fiction has touched on some serious matters and hasn't shied away from showing the consequences of them which impressed me. its just i didn't completely understand what yu meant, but now I do thankyou, im glad your impressed next chapter soon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dotti Posted October 6, 2009 Report Share Posted October 6, 2009 I’ll find a set of stairs to throw myself down Man that was so powerful! That last chapter was amazing! Poor Belle Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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