Jody Posted September 11, 2009 Report Share Posted September 11, 2009 (edited) Chapter 5 Great chapter. This is not something I say often in fic or the show but I really enjoyed Nicole's scenes. With both Roman and Geoff. Both scenes were written extremely well. Chapter 6 Aden and Belle have a really nice friendship in this fic. I like the way she opens up to him about she's feeling. I really hope she takes his advice about David. As for David right now I can't tell whether he's just a lousy boyfriend or if he could be dangerous. I wonder what's wrong with Martha. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Edited September 11, 2009 by Jody Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Taniya_K Posted September 15, 2009 Report Share Posted September 15, 2009 Firstly, poor, poor Nicole! I absolutely loved the way you wrote her with Roman and Geoff here. I just feel so sorry for her! Hmm... There's so much going on that everytime I start to think 'maybe...?', the whole theory is blown apart by another thing I'm still a bit about David. I really hope he's not the killer. Though I'm starting to wonder if it was him to attacked Belle at end... Cannot wait for more! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Barbara Posted September 16, 2009 Report Share Posted September 16, 2009 It definitely lives up to its expectations. *smiles* The attacker flung Belle through the French doors? He's even crazier than I thought. I hope they catch him soon. Fortunately, she is alive and was 'lucky' enough that he didn't rape her on top of everything else. I don't think he would have had enough time to rape her anyway. I hope Rachel is making sure Doctor Mathews (the name! ) is going to be punished or fired. What a moron! I'm glad Martha and the baby are okay. More please. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rocknroll Posted September 16, 2009 Report Share Posted September 16, 2009 amazing!!! i loved the content of it! nic refusing to go back to bed lol n belle!! thank god she wasn't raped!! im glad martha n the baby are ok!! xx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tessalove Posted September 16, 2009 Report Share Posted September 16, 2009 Aw no! Poor Belle! Haha Nic refusing to go back! Good update! El x Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ranger 1 Posted September 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 16, 2009 Good update.At least it looks as though Martha and Belle are going to be all right. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
adellejefferiesxox Posted September 17, 2009 Report Share Posted September 17, 2009 Good chapter! Poor Belle, I hope she's okay! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
amz89 Posted September 17, 2009 Report Share Posted September 17, 2009 aww poor belle, aden is so amazing to her. Can't wait for more. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
suzannelgnz Posted September 17, 2009 Report Share Posted September 17, 2009 Bec- I'm really enjoying this fic It's great that Martha's ok Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Taniya_K Posted September 22, 2009 Report Share Posted September 22, 2009 Gosh, poor Belle! I hope she's ok... But being thrown through the French doors is just so brutal! I hope they get closer to catching this murderer soon! Can't wait for more Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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