Fear (by matticus01) - comments

[Red Ranger 1]

Great start and an interesting idea, I loved the way you wrote Belle it seemed just like her.Wondering if I'm meant to be naturally suspicious of David seeing as he's a new character or whether that's a red herring.Looking forward to seeing you continue.

[maccaz]

Good start.

I thought you said you weren't posting here again after your last fic...?

[matticus01]

Good start.

I thought you said you weren't posting here again after your last fic...?

what can I say... no matter how hard I try, I cant seem to stay away, and why blame everyone for only some people's idiocy!

anyway, I have friends and people here who like my fic's, why let them suffer?

[Jody]

This sounds interesting. Good first chapter. I liked the character descriptions as well. Alf's one made me laugh a little.

[tessalove]

I like it!!

Update soon!

[crazylazy]

great start - really like it x

[jdoddy]

Sounds interesting, don't like the sound of a suicide to be honest... but I suspect it will add another dimension to the story.

I just hope it's not Nicole or Geoff.. and that the secret affection is revealed.. but, thats just a Niff shipper talking!

Looking forward to the next chapter

[EmmaJane123]

Good Start, This sounds interesting. I loved the character descripitions.

I also watched your video which was amazing. I loved how you put the clips together.

Cant wait 4 more

Xxxxx

[~Zoe~]

Great start Bec, I like it

Update soon

[Barbara]

I'm happy Jack & Martha are having a baby but from the trailer, things don't look so good.

And Mattie and Lucas are together! I'm not surprised as it is you who is writing this fic!

Oh no Martha!

I don't trust David and I haven't even read much about him!

More please.