Red Ranger 1 Posted August 7, 2009 Report Share Posted August 7, 2009 Great start and an interesting idea, I loved the way you wrote Belle it seemed just like her.Wondering if I'm meant to be naturally suspicious of David seeing as he's a new character or whether that's a red herring.Looking forward to seeing you continue. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
maccaz Posted August 7, 2009 Report Share Posted August 7, 2009 Good start. I thought you said you weren't posting here again after your last fic...? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
matticus01 Posted August 7, 2009 Report Share Posted August 7, 2009 Good start. I thought you said you weren't posting here again after your last fic...? what can I say... no matter how hard I try, I cant seem to stay away, and why blame everyone for only some people's idiocy! anyway, I have friends and people here who like my fic's, why let them suffer? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jody Posted August 7, 2009 Report Share Posted August 7, 2009 This sounds interesting. Good first chapter. I liked the character descriptions as well. Alf's one made me laugh a little. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tessalove Posted August 7, 2009 Report Share Posted August 7, 2009 I like it!! Update soon! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
crazylazy Posted August 7, 2009 Report Share Posted August 7, 2009 great start - really like it x Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jdoddy Posted August 7, 2009 Report Share Posted August 7, 2009 Sounds interesting, don't like the sound of a suicide to be honest... but I suspect it will add another dimension to the story. I just hope it's not Nicole or Geoff.. and that the secret affection is revealed.. but, thats just a Niff shipper talking! Looking forward to the next chapter Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EmmaJane123 Posted August 7, 2009 Report Share Posted August 7, 2009 Good Start, This sounds interesting. I loved the character descripitions. I also watched your video which was amazing. I loved how you put the clips together. Cant wait 4 more Xxxxx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Zoe~ Posted August 7, 2009 Report Share Posted August 7, 2009 Great start Bec, I like it Update soon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Barbara Posted August 7, 2009 Report Share Posted August 7, 2009 I'm happy Jack & Martha are having a baby but from the trailer, things don't look so good. And Mattie and Lucas are together! I'm not surprised as it is you who is writing this fic! Oh no Martha! I don't trust David and I haven't even read much about him! More please. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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