kitkat1992 Posted July 23, 2010 Report Share Posted July 23, 2010 Its nice to hear Iliana's thoughts again, I had almost forgotten that she had been reading the diary. Loving this story though, even if Aden is dying Can't wait to read more Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yaz88 Posted July 23, 2010 Report Share Posted July 23, 2010 You havent lost me i just hadnt signed in for a while and im useless at keeping up with commenting. I love this fic, its amazing Awwww Aden's gonna die soon i wonder whats gonna happen to Robert though as he isnt there later either great chapter, cant wait for the next one Xx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ranger 1 Posted July 28, 2010 Report Share Posted July 28, 2010 Oh...wow.Loved the farewells with Nicole and Roman with Aden finally telling them what they meant to him.After that I was expecting a big farewell with Belle but actually what you did was much better, quiet and peaceful and full of unspoken understanding.Fantastic. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HighwayUnicorn Posted July 28, 2010 Report Share Posted July 28, 2010 (edited) Deleted. Edited September 14, 2012 by HighwayUnicorn Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Scotcaz22 Posted July 28, 2010 Report Share Posted July 28, 2010 (You haven't lost me as a reader - this is one of my favourite fics and I'm always looking forward to an update but for some reason, I didn't get any nofiications from BttB for this and other fics I've tracked! so I have a lot to catch up! lol) I loved reading from Illiana's POV and the way she started to remember Aden - that was lovely. I could so understand how she felt about not wanting to read the next journal entry. OMG - the last chapter - that...that was just so emotional - the way Aden talked to everyone who meant a lot to him in his life and then saying goodbyes to his children...and just being with Belle, not saying anything...that was just so fitting and lovely yet so angsty! It made me cry! That shows how well you're writing this fic and I can't wait to read the next few chapters and finding out more about what happened to Belle, and to Robbie too. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HighwayUnicorn Posted August 3, 2010 Report Share Posted August 3, 2010 (edited) Deleted. Edited September 17, 2012 by HighwayUnicorn Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ranger 1 Posted August 3, 2010 Report Share Posted August 3, 2010 Wow.It's good to see everyone else's thoughts and feelings on what's happened.Don't worry about there not being many happy chapters, it's working out well. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Scotcaz22 Posted August 24, 2010 Report Share Posted August 24, 2010 Awwww....that was just...gosh...heart-wrenching! Brilliant, the way you wrote each person's emotions through, and I loved the reminders of the photographs laying around in the house, and it just felt right that Ric was the one who was the 'narrator' - it seemed right that an outsider of some sort would comment on each photograph, you know? Beautifully done Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HighwayUnicorn Posted August 24, 2010 Report Share Posted August 24, 2010 (edited) Deleted. Edited September 17, 2012 by HighwayUnicorn Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ranger 1 Posted August 24, 2010 Report Share Posted August 24, 2010 I really liked that chapter and how you involved everyone and showed how they were reacting and taking part.Looking forward to more. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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