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That was a brilliant story... amazing - its a shame to think he couldn't live without her, but that just adds another element to the storyline that we won't see on the television - very emotional and beautifully written.. a truly brilliant one-shot.

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oh my god! That was really well written h&a addict, very well done. It was so sad though. You described everything really well. Loved this fic.

I had to carry her back to Irene’s and we spent her last night in Irene’s bed

HAHAA dirty mind :lol: I hope you mean Belle's old room.

yeah i did. thanks for pointing that out. i edited it as soon as i realised

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That was so sad :'( you described how much aden was in pain brilliantly and i liked how you wrote about their relationship in the past . Belle meant so much to him and he couldnt take living without her which made take drastic actions . You made it so realistic . Dat was truly amazing H&Aaddict :-D

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