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Wow.

That was just so brilliant but so, so sad. I've got a couple of spilled tears here and I don't cry easily. That's how great it was. I dunno what else to say or how to explain it. It was Aden's reaction that just hit me. :( Even though from the prologue, I was dreading it, it was still a shock...

Cannot wait for more at all.

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Gosh this is such a sad chapter! :( :( You wrote it well. *cries and mops her eyes with a tissue* Poor Aden and Belle-losing their baby little girl. Whoever did this to a little innocent girl is such a sick scumbag and would rot in hell for what he did to her!

Update soon please

P.S: Will Joey and Charlie be in this fanfiction or not?

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Another terribly sad chapter, but so brilliantly written.

That ending -

the pain in Belle's stomach - she hasn't/isn't going to lose the baby is she? That's assuming there is a baby!

Can't believe that it would be Amanda's husband! Gosh, when and if Aden gets his hands on him... :angry:

Cannot wait for more! You're writing their grief extremely well :)

xoxo

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