adellejefferiesxox Posted March 20, 2009 Report Share Posted March 20, 2009 Thanks Steph! I'm so glad you read it all! Thanks for the comment about Irene. Characters like Irene, Alf and Colleen I enjoy writing because its easy to visualise their character and the way they act and speak LOL. Yes Sydney, Belle and Aden are a cute family and will they or wont they have a new addition to the family? Only time will tell...! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sportzgal82 Posted March 21, 2009 Report Share Posted March 21, 2009 Loving it so far Like the touch with Sydney having diabeties - mum is type 2 diabetic so I kinda know what belle would be thinking sometimes Its so sweet Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
adellejefferiesxox Posted March 22, 2009 Report Share Posted March 22, 2009 Coming up.... (Two different storylines with Aden in distress and panic). 1. Every parents worst fear happens. 2. It was a typical day, a quiet place and the unexpected happens. I'll update as soon as I can. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Zoe~ Posted March 22, 2009 Report Share Posted March 22, 2009 I've just read through the whole fiction Steph, it's really good Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stephanie Posted March 30, 2009 Report Share Posted March 30, 2009 A departure from your usual style of chapter writing but I think that it was a good choice as it better suited the scenario, since it was mostly dialogue. Very fast moving chapter and an interesting one. I look forward to finding out if it's a boy or a girl and what they name it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HAA Girl 08 Posted March 30, 2009 Report Share Posted March 30, 2009 Great pace of the chapter. Glad the baby is ok Cannot wait to find out what sex the baby is! And what they decide to name it! Update soon. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
adellejefferiesxox Posted March 30, 2009 Report Share Posted March 30, 2009 Yeah I prefer to write like this (Script style), I can't describe things lor write like Taniya_K can (who is a very talented writer, may I add!!!) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inactive User Posted March 30, 2009 Report Share Posted March 30, 2009 Great chapter. Glad the baby is okay. Update soon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
**Julie** Posted March 30, 2009 Report Share Posted March 30, 2009 Great chapter. I liked the style you wrote it in. Glad the baby is OK. Update soon. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zetti Posted March 30, 2009 Report Share Posted March 30, 2009 I love the script style Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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