charmed60 Posted February 10, 2009 Report Share Posted February 10, 2009 That was such an amazing one-shot (although as a Tachel fan I didn't particularly like the ending ) But it was really beautifully written and really put into perspective how much loss Tony's had in his life. You're such a good writer! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LAURZY! Posted February 10, 2009 Report Share Posted February 10, 2009 That was so good!! really well written, the emotions and calmness of it all was just...wow! Loved the ending about Jazz! I hope you write more stuff, your really good! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zetti Posted February 10, 2009 Report Share Posted February 10, 2009 From a unbiased view, I loved that especially the way you explained in complete detail how he felt. You tied in Beth's death and Jacks' and the devasting way he found about both and made them really good reading, I always love reading your work & I hope you write more like this Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inactive User Posted February 10, 2009 Report Share Posted February 10, 2009 Wow great touching and emoticonal oneshot. You described Tony's feelings and emoticons well in this oneshot Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eli Posted February 11, 2009 Report Share Posted February 11, 2009 Aww, thanks, guys! I'm so glad people liked it, and I really appreciate the comments. Hopefully I have more stuff coming soon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HAA Girl 08 Posted February 11, 2009 Report Share Posted February 11, 2009 The emotions were really well written! Well done, Eli! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eli Posted February 11, 2009 Report Share Posted February 11, 2009 Thank you, I really appreciate it Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Miranda Posted February 11, 2009 Report Share Posted February 11, 2009 Great story, nice to see something about another character who isn't Aden/Belle [even though I do like them]. I'd forgotten how much loss Tony has suffered in his life. No wonder he isn't a loud, confident, in yer face type person. This story reminded me of someone I know who lost their dad, big sister and one year old son within a few years- how do people cope with all that? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lise Posted February 12, 2009 Report Share Posted February 12, 2009 Eli, that was amazing! I'd never remembered that Tony had lost that many people in his life. Poor Tony! I loved the emotion in it all. You should definitely write more. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jen Posted February 12, 2009 Report Share Posted February 12, 2009 Eli, I always enjoy reading your one-shots. It was just so simply written but captured all the turmoil in Tony's life. It is true that he always seems to be the one that is left behind. Even when is family doesn't die, but Lucas is off at uni and Mattie and Ric in Perth. All those people who he was close too seem to leave. It's so sad really . But still, I really liked the ending. Tony/Jazz is awesomeness! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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