Red Ranger 1 Posted February 10, 2009 Report Posted February 10, 2009 (edited) I liked that, I can really imagine that that's how they'll all be in the future.Loved the banter between the three of them. Edited January 23, 2016 by QUIET ACHIEVER Quote
LAURZY! Posted February 10, 2009 Report Posted February 10, 2009 That was so good! I loved how you wrote each character, the dialogue and the characters thoughts were so well written! Quote
QUIET ACHIEVER Posted February 10, 2009 Report Posted February 10, 2009 Miranda, you've really excelled yourself with your amazing writing ability. I truly enjoyed reading your fiction and I do hope that there will be a sequel to it in the foreseeable future. Oh and yes I did spot all of the criteria. Quote
Miranda Posted February 10, 2009 Report Posted February 10, 2009 Thanks Ranger, Laurzy and QA. I'm overcome by your compliments, because I was really nervous about posting this., I wrote it a few weeks ago and have been agonising over it. I was worried that people would say 'she's not still going on about Lucas is she' or even worse: 'who are Ric, Mattie and Lucas?' Luckily they haven't been forgotten that quickly. Quote
Zetti Posted February 10, 2009 Report Posted February 10, 2009 I loved it, I really wish that you would write more. I love the fact that you named Mattie's son Flynn and her daughter Beth Quote
Miranda Posted February 10, 2009 Report Posted February 10, 2009 Thanks Zetti. I would love to write more but that pesky real life gets in the way Its funny, I called the kids Flynn and Beth for obvious reasons, but I realise that two of my daughter's friends are called Flynn and Beth, so they must be popular names at the moment..! Quote
Zetti Posted February 11, 2009 Report Posted February 11, 2009 Thanks Zetti. I would love to write more but that pesky real life gets in the way Its funny, I called the kids Flynn and Beth for obvious reasons, but I realise that two of my daughter's friends are called Flynn and Beth, so they must be popular names at the moment..! I love those names! Quote
Eli Posted February 11, 2009 Report Posted February 11, 2009 Aww, I like this oneshot I like how you describe details, and how you included some more links to the past even though they weren't really important for the story itself (like the article about Robbie and Alf, and the kids' names). My favourite thing about it was how you ended it though, I like it when people leave the ending kind of open although you see where this could be going Quote
Miranda Posted February 11, 2009 Report Posted February 11, 2009 Thanks Eli. I'm glad you liked the inclusion of Alf and Robbie because originally I put Alf in to fit in with QA's stringent guidelines but then I left them in because I thought it would make people laugh. Quote
homeandawayforever23 Posted February 12, 2009 Report Posted February 12, 2009 I really liked that oneshot. It was very well written and you described it perfectly. Quote
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