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Miranda, you've really excelled yourself with your amazing writing ability. I truly enjoyed reading your fiction and I do hope that there will be a sequel to it in the foreseeable future. Oh and yes I did spot all of the criteria. :wink::D

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Thanks Ranger, Laurzy and QA. I'm overcome by your compliments, because I was really nervous about posting this., I wrote it a few weeks ago and have been agonising over it. I was worried that people would say 'she's not still going on about Lucas is she' or even worse: 'who are Ric, Mattie and Lucas?' :lol: Luckily they haven't been forgotten that quickly.

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Thanks Zetti. I would love to write more but that pesky real life gets in the way :lol: Its funny, I called the kids Flynn and Beth for obvious reasons, but I realise that two of my daughter's friends are called Flynn and Beth, so they must be popular names at the moment..!

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Thanks Zetti. I would love to write more but that pesky real life gets in the way :lol: Its funny, I called the kids Flynn and Beth for obvious reasons, but I realise that two of my daughter's friends are called Flynn and Beth, so they must be popular names at the moment..!

I love those names! :D

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Aww, I like this oneshot :)

I like how you describe details, and how you included some more links to the past even though they weren't really important for the story itself (like the article about Robbie and Alf, and the kids' names). My favourite thing about it was how you ended it though, I like it when people leave the ending kind of open although you see where this could be going :)

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