KaiyaBlake Posted May 8, 2009 Report Posted May 8, 2009 How did I miss this chapter? That was so funny! Especially the part about Aden inviting himself Can imagine that. Love Aden and Geoff's interaction! Can't wait for part 2, hope it's soon
jack+martha=trooluvv Posted May 8, 2009 Report Posted May 8, 2009 Thanks guys Part 2 should be up in a few days. I've got it about half-way written...
matticus01 Posted May 9, 2009 Report Posted May 9, 2009 jack+martha=trooluvv said: Thanks guys Part 2 should be up in a few days. I've got it about half-way written... Wow, must be a big part 2 then, all the better for us
jack+martha=trooluvv Posted May 10, 2009 Report Posted May 10, 2009 Meg, the Queen of Spoilers, gives you a teaser to keep you going until she can get her lazy butt around to finishing part 2!!! Quote Scared?” Aden had come up behind her. Belle whipped around. “No…not really…” she lied. “It’s OK, Belle, we’ll get off here.” “Sure, sure,” she mumbled. “I’m freezing, Aden.” She held out a pale, skinny arm for him to look at. It was mottled blue-and-purple with goosebumps, and each individual hair was standing up. “Want me to warm you up?” he asked. There was no hint of cheekiness in his voice now. It was soft and nice. “As if you’d do any good, Aden,” she replied, trying to wring out her soaked hair. He came up behind her and wrapped his arms around her waist, pressing his cheek to the top of her head. She shivered at the feeling of her skin touching his. “Aden…” she whispered softly. “Don’t.” “Belle,” he hushed into the top of her head, “I swear that I am not just trying to get into your pants. I really feel something for you, and I’m pretty sure you feel that way too.” She didn’t say anything. The rain still beat down on them, sliding down her face. Another flash. “I’m so attracted to you, Belle, I can hardly stand it…and I don’t want to beat around the bush any more. If you say that you don’t want me now, I’ll go away. I’ll leave you alone.” Belle disentangled herself from his arms and stared up at him, his rain-streaked face, his green eyes, his spiky blonde hair. Her breath came in ragged gasps. It seemed like an eternity for both of them – though it was only a few seconds – that they looked at each other. And she made her decision.
Taniya_K Posted May 10, 2009 Report Posted May 10, 2009 Hehe...! That was an awesome sneak peek! I just hope she makes the right decision! Can't wait for Part 2!!!!
xknomex Posted May 10, 2009 Report Posted May 10, 2009 eeeeeek thats soo Brilliant SP!! cant wait for the rest
Stephanie Posted May 11, 2009 Report Posted May 11, 2009 Just read through the whole story. It's really good. So could never imagine Aden/Mattie! Mattie should go and be with Geoff! Looking forward to the next chapter. That teaser was evil, by the way. Brilliant, but evil.
adellejefferiesxox Posted May 14, 2009 Report Posted May 14, 2009 HURRY UP AND UPDATE!!!!! I like the sneek peek!!!!! :D
jack+martha=trooluvv Posted May 14, 2009 Report Posted May 14, 2009 It really is almost done, guys. Tell you what - I'll give you a decision. Quicker update, or longer chapter?
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