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Okies dokster people.

I will update today. It won't be longer than an hour. Maybe even 30 minutes, but I don't want to give any false hope lol. Thanks to everyone who is waiting for me to update. It means a lot to me that my crazy rambling and dreams of Adelle as enjoyed by others!

xoxo

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Okies dokster people.

I will update today. It won't be longer than an hour. Maybe even 30 minutes, but I don't want to give any false hope lol. Thanks to everyone who is waiting for me to update. It means a lot to me that my crazy rambling and dreams of Adelle as enjoyed by others!

xoxo

YAY!!!!

will be patiently waiting

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Just caught up with the last four chapters.

I knew Drew would write something nice. I like the way you are keeping him concerned and not liking Aden for Belle but at the same time not making him sound like a jealous jerk. I am loving his scenes in this fic. I love how worried he was when he figured something was wrong.

"I'm a veggie, not a rabbit."

>Love that line.

Amanda is brilliant in this as well. The talk between Belle and her was lovely. It's good to see Amanda giving some good advice. I'm glad you are portraying her as a good mother instead of a selfish, inconsiderate person. Didn't like that she immediately snapped at Drew though.

Aden sitting at Belle's bedside was sweet. But why did he have to go straight to snapping at Drew. He is Aden though so it's believable that he'd do that. I hope he or Amanda atleast apologizes to Drew for blaming him. We haven't had much of Aden lately so there's not much to say but I am sure when there is I'll be back to gushing about how great he is.

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