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Guest adelle

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Good news. This story is always the first one I check for updates as it never fails to make me smile, in fact I'm usually sitting in front of my computer grinning like an idiot while reading this.

Aw, thanks!!

I dont think I can update tonight, but def tomorrow night

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Wow! The conversation runs really well and the scene had been set for the next part of the story. I really like the way you leave the reader in suspense at the end, have you been learning from the H&A writers about cliffhangers?

I'm looking forward to the next chapter :D

BTW, I hope you don't mind me pointing this out, but knuckleheads starts with a k. (I know it's pedantic, feel free to tell me to shut up :) )

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