ilovekateritchie Posted June 1, 2007 Report Share Posted June 1, 2007 Oh no, why won't he believe Rachel??? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Roccoluver Posted June 1, 2007 Report Share Posted June 1, 2007 Thanks, as for Tom not believing Rachel, it hasn't yet (and maybe won't) been written in, but before Tom left for Uni, The family was "perfect" e.g Dominic didn't beat up his childern and Julie wasn't a drunk who could careless, after Tom left, Dom felt like the family was breaking apart so is trying to control and keep it together though violence... so as far as Tom know's everything still picture perfect.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Reo Posted June 1, 2007 Report Share Posted June 1, 2007 Great chapter,poor Mark.. Cant believe Tom wont believe it.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest [x]whacko[x]jen[x] Posted June 2, 2007 Report Share Posted June 2, 2007 Poor Mark! Jen is quite rude to Julie, but she deserved it. Hehe. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kaciexox Posted June 2, 2007 Report Share Posted June 2, 2007 TOM HAS TO BELIEVE RACHEL I love Jen now...she is so funny loved the blonde line update soon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest [x]whacko[x]jen[x] Posted June 2, 2007 Report Share Posted June 2, 2007 TOM HAS TO BELIEVE RACHEL I love Jen now...she is so funny loved the blonde line update soon Hehe. Don't worry, I'm not really that blonde in real life. Update more soon please Jane! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Roccoluver Posted June 4, 2007 Report Share Posted June 4, 2007 this could be the worst update I have ever written, I know where this is going but the writing sucks, never the less, here is the update Mark flicked his yes opened before shutting them and covering them with his hand to block out the light. The light dimmed and he blinked slowly. A strange shape hovered over his head. “Should I get a doctor” Jen asked, he mumbled a reply and reached out for the water jug. Jen muffled a laugh and poured a glass of water, handing it over to him. She sat down next to the hospital bed and bit her lip neverously. “Where’s” he coughed ‘Where’s Tom?” “Ah..” Mark shuffled back in his bed in an attempt to sit up. “Why do I feel that’s a bad sign” he moaned. “He kinda left after Rachel kinda talked to him about you” Mark sighs and cradles his head in his hand, Jen stands up. “Should I get a doctor” “No, don’t worry” “Anyway he got pretty angrily when Rachel suggested that Dom might hit you” “Yeah well it doesn’t surprise me” “What, why not?” Mark smiled sadly “Everything used to be prefect once, before Tom left for university. After Tom left it was like someone shot dad though the heart” he chuckled quietly “Dad used to run a organization for children who ran away from abusive parents” There was a knock at the door and Irene stuck her head in. “Hey there love, I just came to check up on ya” Jules sat opposite Cassie at the diner, she peered over her menu at him. “What do you want Jules?” He smiled nervously at her. “I have done something wrong” “What’s new?” “Cassie I’m being serious” “So am I” “Look you know Mark?” “Yeah, we’ve met, he seems like a nice guy" Jules bit his lip “I think he might be in trouble” Irene smiled as she got up from her seat. “I best be getting back to diner” Mark nodded “Well cya around” Irene nodded and slowly made her way to the door, Jen hopped up. “Actually I was going to get something to eat, I’ll come with” As Irene shut the door behind them, Jen turned and faced her. “I think we need to have a talk” Irene frowned “Right girly, this way” Rachel entered the room, a frown deep embed on her face. “Well you’re free to go” she said sadly, looking over her charts. “Already?” She sighed and rubbed her temple “Well normally we would keep you under observation for another 3 days at least and get you into counseling for your drug addiction but your father has decided now will be the prefect time to leave town and got a court order to have you released” Mark blinked “Leaving?’ Rachel nodded, sitting down on the hospital bed “Unless you have a good reason not to go back to your father” she looked down at his arms. Mark smiled “I better get dressed then, when is dad picking me up?” Rachel frowned “Too soon” “Huh? ”I said soon” Someone will die either in the next one or the one after that. BTW Julie and Tom have left Summer Bay Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sally_Fletcher Posted June 4, 2007 Report Share Posted June 4, 2007 Who are you going to kill? Update now or I'll poke you! This is fantastic, I haven't been on in ages... but anyway... Evil Tom not believing Rachel! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Reo Posted June 4, 2007 Report Share Posted June 4, 2007 Jules,Jen and Irene..Hope one of them saves him..I'm hoping Jules as he is now starting to worry about him.. Also hope that Tom realizes what is going on and actually believes it. I wonder who's going to die..Maybe Jen? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Roccoluver Posted June 4, 2007 Report Share Posted June 4, 2007 Thanks guys, Im all bouncy now there should be more later today Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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