beckyboo Posted May 4, 2007 Report Share Posted May 4, 2007 Omg Why the hell would he be talking to Jack Poor Martha Update soon xxxx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zetti Posted May 4, 2007 Report Share Posted May 4, 2007 Poor Martha Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tasha Posted May 5, 2007 Report Share Posted May 5, 2007 Does Evan know Jack is Martha's husband??? Great chapter though. Martha should have told Jack about Evan, i have a feeling its all going to blow up in her face MOre please Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Traceve Posted May 5, 2007 Report Share Posted May 5, 2007 I don't like Evan Great writing Update soon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
puja Posted May 5, 2007 Report Share Posted May 5, 2007 Uh-oh, Evan's talking to Jack Its only the second chapter and I don't like him! Poor Martha. She and her cute little family were doing just great before Evan turned up Great start, update when you can! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Angel~ Posted May 5, 2007 Report Share Posted May 5, 2007 Thanks, everyone. Here's chapter 3 Chapter 3 “Hey Martha,” Jack said, turning around to look at her. “Come over here.” Martha walked up to Jack; she panicked as she saw Evan give her a mischievous smile. “Martha, this is Evan. Evan, this is my wife Martha and my two little girls, Ashley and Alison,” Jack introduced. “Nice to meet you,” Martha said, talking as if she’d never seen Evan in her life. “You too,” Evan smiled again. “Well, my break is over, have to get back to work,” Jack exclaimed looking at his watch. He kissed Martha and went. “What were you doing?!” Martha hissed. “I was just having a friendly conversation,” Evan said. “Don’t you dare tell him that…” Martha stopped when she noticed everyone was there. “Tell him what?” Evan asked, acting innocently. “You know what I mean,” Martha said. “I mean it Evan, stay away from me and my family. Got that?” “Yeah,” Evan said, getting up. “But I’m not letting you forget it,” *** “I’m home,” Jack said. “Daddy!” Ashley exclaimed. “Hello, princess,” Jack said, lifting her up. “I got a boyfriend today,” Ashley informed him. “A boyfriend?!” Jack said, surprised. “What’s his name?” “Alex,” Ashley smiled. “Young love,” Jack muttered, while Ashley hopped out of his arms. Martha walked in. “I might have to hire Ashley bodyguards,” Jack joked. “Why?” Martha smiled. “She needs to stay as far away as possible from his Alex,” Jack smiled. “I don’t want their relationship to get any more serious,” “Oh, shut up Jack,” Martha laughed. “She’s only four!” “Where’s my baby?” Jack said. “She’s having a nap. She was very tired, when I got back from ‘Noah’s’.” Martha said. “How was work?” “Good. There’s a work party on today. You don’t mind if I go, do you?” Jack said. “No, of course not,” Martha said. “Great,” Jack said, leaning in for a kiss. *** “Ashley, are you finished your dinner?” Martha asked. “Yes, mummy,” Ashley said. “Good. Go upstairs and change into your Pyjama’s and I’ll be up in a minute,” Martha said. Ashley ran upstairs. Martha lifted up Alison from her highchair. After she had both of them to bed she sat down in front of the sofa. Then the bell rang. Martha got up to get it. “What do you want?” She sighed as she found Evan in-front of her. “I want my baby,” Evan said. “That was ages ago Evan. It’s over,” Martha said. “How come you can have his babies when you’re with him but you can’t have mine?” Evan said. “It was a mistake with you! It was never meant to happen!” Martha cried. “You got rid of my baby, now I’m going to get rid of yours…” Evan muttered. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HeavenForbid Posted May 5, 2007 Report Share Posted May 5, 2007 :o OMG!! That was an excellent chapter! I was so not excepting that to happen! Amazing Chapter Aw....How cute is Ashley?! Her and her boyfriend..Aw... Update Soon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
beckyboo Posted May 5, 2007 Report Share Posted May 5, 2007 :o OMG!! That was an excellent chapter! I was so not excepting that to happen! Amazing Chapter Aw....How cute is Ashley?! Her and her boyfriend..Aw... Update Soon I agree So when Martha was with Evan she fell pregnant and had an abortion!? Update soon xxxxx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tasha Posted May 6, 2007 Report Share Posted May 6, 2007 Ashley and Alex sitting in a tree K I S S I N G Great chapter. DId Martha miscarry or abort the bubz??? More please Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Traceve Posted May 6, 2007 Report Share Posted May 6, 2007 Wow! Awesome writing. I wonder what Martha will do now Update Soon, Please. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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