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I like this fic too, Eli, tho not as much as "Sisters" - but that's mainly because I feel there are too many characters for me to get to know at the moment. But I wouldn't worry too much about that, I always hate starting a new book or watching a new soap for the same reason :rolleyes: but once I DO get to know everyone I'm fine... :) and I'm intrigued about DeAnna Phillips...

The ocean was dark and the waves were gettign bigger. Crashing on the beach like a warning to everyone who wanted to go for a swim. "Don't come too close... I'm angry... and as soon as the rain starts falling, washing sand on the rocks away, I'll be furious."

I loved that! :) What I like most about your writing is, you tell an actual story. :D

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