Tasha Posted December 11, 2006 Report Share Posted December 11, 2006 Ok i got bored, so heres my first chapter. Its a big crap, and sorry for all the dialogue Hope you enjoy Chapter 1 After a long day at the station, Jack sat in Noah’s enjoying a nice, cold beer, while chatting with Alf and Beth. “Strike me flamin’ gallah,” exclaimed Alf. “Grand dad!” Martha cried out, while running and giving Alf a big hug. “Martha, what are you doing here?” Alf asked, “I wasn’t expecting you till tomorrow” “I decided to come early,” replied Martha, “I missed you so much, and my landlord called me this morning telling me that my apartment is ready, so here I am.” “That great love, I missed you too, and I’m glad you’re here,” said Alf while giving Martha another hug. Then Alf introduced Martha to Beth and a very stunned looking Jack. He had never seen someone as beautiful as her, and he had every intention of getting to know her. Martha noticed Jack looking at her, and gave his a warm smile, with which he returned his famous Holden smile. “Would you care to join me for a drink?” Martha asked Jack. “Sure,” Jack replied leading Martha towards one of the sofas in the bar. They spent the next hour just chatting and getting to know each other. This guy is amazing, and a cop. I’ve always said I loved a man in uniform, Martha thought, letting out a small giggle. “What’s so funny?” asked a curious Jack. She’s gorgeous, and that laugh of hers is so cute, Jack thought. “Oh nothing,” replied an embarrassed Martha. Jack just nodded and smiled at her. Noticing some people dancing, Jack plucked up the courage to ask Martha, and was delighted when she accepted. ‘This Old Love’ by Lior was playing while Jack and Martha danced. Martha felt safe in his arms, and she felt as though she could just stay there for the rest of her life. There was something special about Jack that Martha just loved. She never felt this way about a guy, especially one she has only know for like an hour. Jack stood there thinking the same thing. He knew that Martha was the one he wanted to spend the rest of his life with, which amazed him. Kim, Robbie, Rob’s girlfriend, Kelly, Tasha, Maddie, Luc and Belle walked into Noah’s Bar, when they noticed Jack dancing with a mysterious brunette. “Looks like Jack has finally hooked up with some,” Robbie said jokingly. Jack noticed his friends walking in and stopped dancing, taking Martha towards them. “OMG!” Martha exclaimed in total shock. Now that was a face she hadn’t seen in years. “Martha?” Next Chapter - who does Martha see, and how does she know that person - who has a date Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Rosey~ Posted December 11, 2006 Report Share Posted December 11, 2006 Love it I'm supposed to be writing xmas cards, but ya know? When can we expect another update?? xxx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
>>Emma<< Posted December 11, 2006 Report Share Posted December 11, 2006 Hehe, I've just written all of mine ^.... Great chapter, loving this fic already, please update soon, can't wait to see who it is she's seen Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tasha Posted December 11, 2006 Report Share Posted December 11, 2006 The person she saw is one of Jack's friends who walked in, but who it is and how she knows them will have to wait. I'll try update tomorrow, i'll start on the chapter now since im not doing nothing Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
>>Emma<< Posted December 11, 2006 Report Share Posted December 11, 2006 Yay another chapter, can't wait to see who it is...hmm...wonder if it's Robbie's girlfriend... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-lolly- Posted December 11, 2006 Report Share Posted December 11, 2006 Oh i want to know who it is....Great first chapter Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gawguss_tiff Posted December 11, 2006 Report Share Posted December 11, 2006 wow that was awesome i loved it lol ooo i wonder who she sees ooo and who has a date lol? update ASAP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Adia Posted December 11, 2006 Report Share Posted December 11, 2006 Awww, I love this Tasha! You have me in suspense (omg, I so had a Colleen moment there because I was just about to type suspenders!) Lol. But great fic. Please update soon! I want to know who Martha saw? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
beckyboo Posted December 11, 2006 Report Share Posted December 11, 2006 AWWWWWWW You need to update young lady!!!!!!!!!!!! This is a great start!!!!!!!!!!!! I wonder who she knows!!!!!!!!!! It better not get in the way of J&M!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jacksthehottest Posted December 11, 2006 Report Share Posted December 11, 2006 awwww.....great start, loving this. Please update soon can't wait to read more Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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