SfanS Posted December 4, 2006 Report Share Posted December 4, 2006 ^^^^ MY guess is that she saw the two other lovebirds skinnydipping! Now THAT would bhe funny! Great chapter! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cas Posted December 4, 2006 Report Share Posted December 4, 2006 ^^ lol, that would be great, wish I thought of that! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SfanS Posted December 5, 2006 Report Share Posted December 5, 2006 She doesn't see them skinny dipping..... What a let down! I'm sure it will be great anyway...does it involve someone in the nude at ALL? Alf skinny dipping!? Ugh, mental picture...whatever you do, DONT try and think about it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tasha7905 Posted December 5, 2006 Report Share Posted December 5, 2006 Great fic. I cant wait to find out what Jack and Martha saw and where the hell Lucas thinks he is going, he is not allowed to leave Hope there is more soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
victim-ofthenight Posted December 5, 2006 Report Share Posted December 5, 2006 Just read all 3 chapters in one sitting i must say you have marvellous writting skills and alot of talent i look forward to the next installment and finding out whats in store next Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cas Posted December 10, 2006 Report Share Posted December 10, 2006 Thanks to everyone who has commented recently. Sorry I haven't been writting much at the moment and this chapter is quite short but my PC has broken so I'm using my brothers. Also a huge thankyou to QUIET ACHIEVER for proof reading this! ~CHAPTER FOUR~ Martha Tears are springing to my eyes as I try not to look away from the sight in front of me. "Call an ambulance!" Jack says to me but I just stand there in a trance. "Martha!" I quickly become alert and pull out my phone, no signal. "Jack, I haven’t got signal, let me try yours," I say frantically. I try again with no luck. "What do we do?" "Well I take this end and you take the foot end, ok?" Jack replies. I pick up my end and we run across the tree trunks and dirt. I look down at my hands, they are covered with blood. Jack "Come on, come on!" Martha screams. I stumble and fall over, but I quickly pull myself up. After what feels like ages we have finally reached the car and we get in, I put my foot on the pedal and I rapidly speed along the empty road towards the hospital. "Jack what happened?" Rachel's voice greets me. "We just found it like this in the bush; we got here as quickly as we could." "Okay thanks guys." she says as she follows the trolley quickly. Luc I gently click the door close. I run to the cliff tops where I said I would meet him. At least I would be doing something worthwhile for this world now. "Lucas?" I turn around swiftly to find a boy of about my age standing in dark clothing. "Yes," I reply. "Are you ready to leave?" he asked. "Yes." I simply answer again. Kim I put together the final touches of the meal; hopefully Rachel will be home soon. Maybe I'll ring her quickly. "Hi Rachel," I say sexily down the phone. "Kim, I'm working, I'll be home in a couple of hours," she says. "Surely nothing can be more important than a nice meal and a hot bath," I reply. "I wish, no seriously I have to go. See you later." Rachel "She's still unconscious, but the surgery went as well as it could have." "That’s good." reply Jack and Martha. "Yes obviously we're going to keep a close eye on her for a while. Do you know how she got like that?" "I don’t know, we were just on a walk and we stumbled over her." Jack replies. Suddenly, down the corridor, comes a loud constant beeping from the heart machine. ~END OF CHAPTER FOUR~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
baby gurl Posted December 10, 2006 Report Share Posted December 10, 2006 loved that chapter..... loved this bit between kim and rachel: "Surely nothing can be more important than a nice meal and a hot bath," I reply. "I wish, no seriously I have to go. See you later." made me laugh....dont know why.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tasha Posted December 11, 2006 Report Share Posted December 11, 2006 What did Jack and Martha find??? A girl obviously, but what happened to her??? Great chapter htough Please update soon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xsianx Posted December 11, 2006 Report Share Posted December 11, 2006 ^^ lol and I was sitting here thinking they had just found a leg! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SfanS Posted December 11, 2006 Report Share Posted December 11, 2006 Sian, that was so funny. I love your jokes at times (at times) OOOOOHHH.... this is getting interesting! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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