Nicom Posted September 11, 2006 Report Share Posted September 11, 2006 Omg I loved it. Jack was so sweet at the beggining and then the Tony bit was so funny and the Coleen bit was so in character, and everything was just perfect! One of my favourite chapters - fantastic writing - you made me laugh and go awwwww. lol Please update asap! What she said *points* Don't you know that it's rude to point Nicole?! Ha ha ha ha ha ha... *glares* Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
[.jessa-belle.] Posted September 12, 2006 Report Share Posted September 12, 2006 Haha That was a classic chapter Amber great writing, Loved how Jack wanted to get Martha a pillow so cute, he really cares for her, and what he said when they were in bed, lol some of it was funny But mostley loving Loved it cant wait for the next.....and cant wait for the next in "Cry to me" Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Annie- Posted September 12, 2006 Report Share Posted September 12, 2006 Wonderful! Gosh, I could read JM fluff all day.... Brilliant brilliant brilliant! The description was fab, and I could feel the emotion! More, more, more! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dolly-999 Posted September 12, 2006 Report Share Posted September 12, 2006 Poor Martha stuck in the middle of a big decision, hope she chooses carefully. Great chapter Amber. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tasha Posted September 12, 2006 Report Share Posted September 12, 2006 Awww...poor Martha. Move in with Jack, or i will But i see where shes coming from. It is too early. But why is she upset. Maybe she says no and Jacks gets angry, thus leaving Martha upset. Awww...poor drama. Bur grat as alwayz. Loving it Please update soon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-lolly- Posted September 12, 2006 Report Share Posted September 12, 2006 Wonder why Martha doesnt wanna move in with Jack..hmmm. As always great chapter bay girl! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-michelle- Posted September 12, 2006 Report Share Posted September 12, 2006 Great chapter. Please update soon. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Clair 247 Posted September 12, 2006 Report Share Posted September 12, 2006 Another brilliant chapter! Can't wait to see what her decision is and find out why she's upset! Hope everything's alright! Please update soon! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shawtyy Posted September 12, 2006 Report Share Posted September 12, 2006 Great chapter! Wonder why Martha is upset . Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xsianx Posted September 12, 2006 Report Share Posted September 12, 2006 great chapter. Jack wouldn't have to ask me twice lol I probely wouldn't wait for an invite either... Looking forwrad to teh next chapter. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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