Lakshya-KTrocks Posted October 23, 2006 Report Share Posted October 23, 2006 Thanks for the comments Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
allibaz91 Posted October 23, 2006 Report Share Posted October 23, 2006 Loved the newest chapter Lakshya-KTrocks!! I'm really into this fic - please update soon!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lakshya-KTrocks Posted October 24, 2006 Report Share Posted October 24, 2006 Peter is sitting in the beach with his body glistening in the sun wearing blue shorts and CD sunglassses but suddenly he sees the girl and is transfixed with her , she is wearing a Red swimsuit with silver sequins with flowing wet hair and splashing about in an ecsatic and Joyfful way as Peter takes off his sunglasses and sees her in a distance with his bright blue eyes staring at her .She suddenly sees Peter and comes out with a furious face and Peter gets up and walks in her direction with a nervous look. Peter-Look i can explain i was watching the view not you The Girl-Look i warned you before and i'm not going to wan you again , please stop looking at me , don't you know its rude to stare Peter-I know but as i told you Summer Bay has the most photogenic views and i'm completely obsessed with looking at them because it's somthing i love to do. The GIrl-I'm not falling for your fibs again evreytime i see you but anyway which i dont and i really hope you dont make this mistake again Peter(grins and Laughs gently)Look whatever your thinking is not true , i stare at a lot of things like painting in an art gallery , the snow falling on a wintery season , see i gave you 2 examples and now you believe me The girl-Whatever and i don't care what you do but i just dont want you to ever look at me that way in future because i don't like it because it's my body and i have a right to tell people ecspecially Menm llike you The girl walks away in a huff staring furiously at Peter and Peter smiles at her and suddenly sits down and puts his hands on his chin with a dreamy expression his face. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ncarp91 Posted October 24, 2006 Report Share Posted October 24, 2006 hey great story please keep it up. update soon please xbyebyex Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
allibaz91 Posted October 24, 2006 Report Share Posted October 24, 2006 Love the latest update - Peter is such a perv lol!! But we love him just how he is Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
swfc Posted October 25, 2006 Report Share Posted October 25, 2006 Love the latest update - Peter is such a perv lol!! But we love him just how he is ^ Completely agree. Fabulous update. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lakshya-KTrocks Posted October 25, 2006 Report Share Posted October 25, 2006 He is but Peter is falling for this girl and he hasn't had this feeling for a long time. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bay_Mad Posted October 25, 2006 Report Share Posted October 25, 2006 I love this! Please update soon!!!!!! I didnt realise Peter was so bad with the ladies Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lakshya-KTrocks Posted October 25, 2006 Report Share Posted October 25, 2006 Peter is in his bed(with his shirt of again)with his Diesal Jeans looking diasppointed relising he has failed to caught the girls attention, Dan and Drew come in (Dan wearing Black Jumper and light Blue jeans and Drew wearing Leather jacket and Black trousers both come in with 2 boxes of Pizza noticing how down Peter is) Peter-I'm not Hungery Lads and i dont want to talk about it Dan-We know what happened , Leah told us and we know how tacky you are in impressing girls Drew-Dad it's ok and we understand , you never had the chance to have a proper relationship Peter-Evreytime i look at her , my heart forgets evreything and i have this amazing feeling tthat i never had for ages and i forgot how to charm the ladies Dan-I know you feel down and thinking how lucky me and Drew are to be in relationshiips but mate we are being serious know and we wanna help you Drew-Yes Dad and another thing , why wouldn't anyone not like you , you are brave , couregous , have the looks to burn the carpet Peter-And a good dumpster that fails to impress ladies , how foolish can you get Dan-We are going to promise you that we are not going to let you down because we are going to get you that girl no matter what Drew-Thats a promise Dad and don't think you are alone in this because we are your family and we are there to make you a love machine with funk and soul Peter-Thank you so much guys(Peter hugs Dan and then his son and all start talking playfully while eating Pizza Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
allibaz91 Posted October 25, 2006 Report Share Posted October 25, 2006 Lol oh wow that was too cute - family bonding moment!!! I give this fic 5/5 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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