Penie Posted July 5, 2006 Report Share Posted July 5, 2006 This I think is my first proper fanfic so be nice!! I would like to thank Jess especially as she proofread it. Chapter 1 I sat on the beach and watched the waves. It had been eight months since Flynn died and things were back to normal. Or as normal as things could ever be. Alf, Morag and Martha had moved back to the flat above the Diner while I stayed with Sally, Cassie and little Pippa, who is nearly three. Although I still wish that Flynn was still here with us. “Ric…..Ric” someone was shaking me. I looked up and saw my girlfriend. She looked mildly concerned. “Hey, I was just thinking” I say, looking up at Belle and smiling cheekily. “Thinking how beautiful I am?” Belle had this cheeky smile that always made me laugh. “No, thinking I’m going to beat you to the Diner. Both of us run across the beach laughing, and reach the Diner shouting loudly. “I won” Belle shouts loudly. “No, I did and you know it looks like you’re paying.” We both looked around and noticed people starring at us. Belle admitted she had lost and said she would pay for the milkshakes. Colleen, as usual, looked as though she had just found some gossip but we were too hot to listen. It was something that Madge Wilkins told her and after that I lost interest. Belle and I made a fast exit holding hand and I heard Colleen mumble her usual words - “Young love”. Belle and I were holding hands while walking on the beach. The sand was smooth and all I could hear was the waves and our footsteps. It was getting dark, so we decided to meet tomorrow. Belle suddenly looked round. “What?” “I just thought someone was watching us” she said with curiosity. “It was probably just someone walking past and happening to notice us.” “Maybe” Belle said uncertainly and we hugged and kissed. I reminded her about tomorrow night at 7:00 when we shall meet next. Then I gave her another short kiss while Sally called me. I walked in and Sally said she wondered where I was. At dinner we told each other of our day. Dan took Pippa VJ to the park, Cassie went to see Matilda and Sally went shopping with Leah. After all their stories, I thought of how great life was and wished it wouldn’t change. Preview: Who does Ric see and what does he want? Can this change Ric’s life? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Penie Posted July 5, 2006 Report Share Posted July 5, 2006 I would also thank Aaron aswell as Jess because he told me to do it aswell! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sevenpuddings Posted July 5, 2006 Report Share Posted July 5, 2006 Very cute beginning. Its always good to beging with fluff, it leads us reviewers into a false sense of security. I'm excited to see where this story goes Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Drew Posted July 6, 2006 Report Share Posted July 6, 2006 That was good. I noticed no one died in the first chapter. Well done Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Penie Posted July 6, 2006 Report Share Posted July 6, 2006 Thank you lol! I am aiming for realistic fan fic, kinda i think. Thanks for both of your comments. HOPE to get more!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Oxidizer Posted July 6, 2006 Report Share Posted July 6, 2006 That's wicked! I'm intrigued 'bout this mysterious guy now - update soon! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tasha7905 Posted July 6, 2006 Report Share Posted July 6, 2006 Great start cant wait to see what else is going to happen. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Tess- Posted July 7, 2006 Report Share Posted July 7, 2006 This is awesome. I'm hooked! More soon please? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lynhay Posted July 8, 2006 Report Share Posted July 8, 2006 This is a really good start - can't wait for more! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
allibaz91 Posted July 8, 2006 Report Share Posted July 8, 2006 Lol heya Penie!! This is really good and aww loving the Ric/Belle cuteness, I'm kind of a Ric/Belle pusher but I know everyone else is very Ric/Cassie orientated. But loving it so far! Post more soon! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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