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Oh dear! Aden's going to feel so guilty. She probably should have told him years ago. Loved how you wrote the whole thing, though. Absolutely can't wait for wait for part b now!

I love the first two Mattie one's. The cropping on all of them is nice.

I love those two and the Jannie av's. Welcome Back!

That was good. You should definitely continue with it. Aden and Belle are still cute even after 16 years. I hope there's nothing wrong with Elsie but I think that something is.

Oh no! I hope Nicole's going to be ok. I wonder what's going on with Geoff?!?! I liked the argument in the supermarket. I wonder what's going on with them, too!

Love the Annie update. Especially love the Annie and Aden one's (the 3rd one to be specific). The "friends" one and the "little girl lost" one, too.

It's stinking hot and I don't normally get too hot.

Happy Birthday BTTB! The article on the main site is great.

I'm even more curious now. I wonder what Belle did! I agree with Taniya, Geoff and Melody do seem a bit awkward.

I liked that a lot. A whole chapter of just Aden and Belle is always good! I think that's probably one of my favourite chapters. It was really good that they talked, properly. Can't wait to see what's going to happen in the next chapter. Good luck with your exams!

I love your last batch. The effects on them are great, they look really good.

I really liked that chapter (and all of the one's that I missed while I was away). I loved the conversation Belle, Matilda, Drew and Ric had about the baby's name. It was very funny. I don't think (or maybe it's hope) that would never come back. He wouldn't be able to just walk away forever, surely?!?!

You've got me very interested. I wonder what their secret is!

That was truly amazing. It's beautifully written. I wish I could write like you!

That was a great ending. I'm sad that it's over. I love the names for the babies.

That was amazing. You had absolutely nothing to worry about. Morag cried! I love Geoff's thoughts. You do an amazing job with that.

P.S. I Love You. It was awesome. I loved the part where she comments about how people are in such a hurry to get younger that they don't realise what a privilege it is to grow old with someone.

I love both of them. I don't know which one I like the best. There is nothing wrong with your writing. It's awesome!

That was good but very sad, too. Poor Aden having to ring everyone. That's got to be an awful job. I loved how you wrote Roman's reaction.

I like them and I'm not even a Harry Potter fan!

That was sweet. I loved it. The first bit with Aden cradling his son was too cute and then him getting the photo of it!

Australia. The first probably 3/4 was boring but the last 1/4 was it's saving grace. I was almost in tears. I love that they included the history of the area.

That's alright. Your exams come first!

That was pretty good angst. I liked Drew, for once I think he did the right thing. I'm sure that once Aden has time to think about things and calms down he'll go home. He can't stay away forever, I hope?!?! Any chance of an update?

That was awesome. It was a great ending. It's sad that it's finished, though.