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That was some classic Jai and Annie, and Nicole for that matter. I think that was one of my favourite chapters.

Thank you! The comments rock! I have another story which is in the midst of maybe having the final touches put to it.

Eli, that was amazing! I'd never remembered that Tony had lost that many people in his life. Poor Tony! I loved the emotion in it all. You should definitely write more.

That was great. Florida sounds great. I hope that everything works out for them.

I loved that chapter. The Belle and Justin stuff was great. He reminded me of Aden so much in that scene.

The Belle icon's are gorgeous. I like all of the Nicole one's, too especially the one with her and Aden.

I love the TWIP icon's. The colouring is amazing. It really suits them.

Love the last two chapters. I like that Edward and Elsie came to help Aden. Lizzie is sweet. I like that Mattie's back.

Annie is just so clueless, it's funny. I can't wait for Annie and Jai's story! Nicole and Aden's banter is good, too.

Loved it, again. Annie cracks me up. Can't wait for the next update.

That was a brillant chapter. I love the teasing. The chocolate stuff especially. You make me crave chocolate. The star almost made me cry. It was such a beautiful idea.

Love the Melody and Nicole one's. Awesome work, again.

I really like the 3rd Aden one and J&M one's, too.

Geoff one's from your previous update are hot, Jen! I like the Nicole one's from this update. Love your work.

It's hot here. Not quite as hot as in Australia, mind you. Weird thing is that the sky is kind of a yellowish/grey colour and apprently it's from the bush fires in Victoria. It's scary that it travels all the way over here.

I was missing Mattie, too. I always forget to write that sort of stuff in my comments. It was good to see her making an appearance, again. The Justin and Aden stuff in this chapter was good. Justin will have to leave soon because he would have hit on every girl in the Bay. Belle and her chocolate cravings make me laugh. I have them and I'm not even pregnant.

I want to go one day, too. I should save up for it! I could meet Todd, too.

Any chance of an update today? Please? No pressure or anthing...

Definitley not just you. I reviewed it a few pages back with pretty much the exact same sentiment. I almost found myself warming to her in some small way but for the majority of it my biggest issue was that the characters had no redeeming qualities- it's definitley not a film I want to go seeing again. It's not something I'm going to go and see again. It was very depressing. I kept thinking it cant be near the end because they're still miserable. Kate and Leo are awesome together. Their chemsitry is magic. Still like them in Titanic better, though.

I love them! I like the "Campbell" one as well and the "Tachel" is great, too.

RACY FLUFF! That was brillant. All of it. It's nice to see them happy, again.

I do still like them but it is nice to see them in the background for while. I think there is such a thing as overexposure. I think I have to agree with Doola. I wouldn't count on happiness for them anytime soon for them. Although, things would get a bit boring if they were just happy all the time.

The three Tessa icon's are beautiful! I'm gonna save the 2nd one.

I liked that a lot! Poor Aden. I hope he talks to Belle. I liked the Irene/Belle chat. It's good to see that you've still got Edward and Elsie in there.

I always felt after Aden's abuse was bought up at his court case and you saw Nicole's reaction that a scene with just them would have been good to address her reaction to finding out. I don't think Nicole or Aden would have just left it there. It's a scene I would have loved to have seen.