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Any chance of that update?

That was awesome. I loved their conversation. I like that they actually talked about it and forgave each other but they still aren't totally over it. GO NIC!

Awww...Jack! I love the last line of Martha.

That's good, I had hoped that I was wrong. In that case, I have no idea what Belle did. Can't wait for the next chapter.

That was great but sad that Elsie has diabetes. I must admit I laughed when you mentioned Dr Geoff Campbell. They do make a lovely little family.

All four of those one's are beautiful, absolutely beautiful. I love seeing some Kit around. I loved Kit. I miss Kit!

That was great. Justin really is a sleaze, isn't he? I loved the fluff. Poor Aden. He really is going to beat himself up over it.

It's good that Belle and Aden are talking again.

I love all of the Aden and Belle av's. That Geoff one is hot! The Miles one is funny.

That was a great update. I hope nothing bad's happened to Elsie.

There was absolutely nothing wrong with that, at all. It was really was heartbreaking. You almost had me in tears.

Beautiful again, Jen. I like the colouring. I like the 2nd J&M av best.

Oh dear! Aden's going to feel so guilty. She probably should have told him years ago. Loved how you wrote the whole thing, though. Absolutely can't wait for wait for part b now!

I love the first two Mattie one's. The cropping on all of them is nice.

I love those two and the Jannie av's. Welcome Back!

That was good. You should definitely continue with it. Aden and Belle are still cute even after 16 years. I hope there's nothing wrong with Elsie but I think that something is.

Oh no! I hope Nicole's going to be ok. I wonder what's going on with Geoff?!?! I liked the argument in the supermarket. I wonder what's going on with them, too!

Love the Annie update. Especially love the Annie and Aden one's (the 3rd one to be specific). The "friends" one and the "little girl lost" one, too.

Happy Birthday BTTB! The article on the main site is great.

I'm even more curious now. I wonder what Belle did! I agree with Taniya, Geoff and Melody do seem a bit awkward.

I liked that a lot. A whole chapter of just Aden and Belle is always good! I think that's probably one of my favourite chapters. It was really good that they talked, properly. Can't wait to see what's going to happen in the next chapter. Good luck with your exams!

I love your last batch. The effects on them are great, they look really good.

I really liked that chapter (and all of the one's that I missed while I was away). I loved the conversation Belle, Matilda, Drew and Ric had about the baby's name. It was very funny. I don't think (or maybe it's hope) that would never come back. He wouldn't be able to just walk away forever, surely?!?!

You've got me very interested. I wonder what their secret is!

That was truly amazing. It's beautifully written. I wish I could write like you!