Nicom

:o!!! Jack has another daughter? Poor Martha. And I kind of guess poor Jack, he obviously doesn't know.. Poor kid too. lol Poor everyone! Apart from Megan. I have no sympathy towards her, she's obviously up to something... Update soon please!

Hey! Sorry people! I have actually wrote the last chapter, but I'im not happy with it.. so I want to do major editing to it. However, I just don't have the time. I have exams, and it's my birthday tomorrow, so I have been going out with mates, and I'll have things going off with family. I will get an update up by Sunday though! I promise. Sorry!! (If you're wondering why I'm still updating on Jealous Eyes, that's because I've already wrote them chapters.)

Lol! *nods* Happy is hard... Evil and argumentative is great fun! Lol. I hope you are all happy at Martha and Jack being nice to each other. Well, they were eventually. Lol. Notice the sentence.. Well, at least he can put up with her annoying-ness! Unlike some moaning people.. *cough* bay_girl and linzie_mac01 *cough* lol

! How mint wa that? Lol! Totally unexpected. My god. She just stabbed her.. Martha, don't die!!

OMG Martha you fool! Listen to him! Geez louise! lol Great chapter! Hoping for more soon!

Lol! The other fic was for you, not this one. I don't think anything too bad happens in this fic, sure Martha continues to act like a freak, and quite annoying, but i'm sure it'll all end okay. And I haven't had Martha cheat on Jack so far. Which is good. It's up to you I guess if you want to continue or not. But I'll miss your god damn correct predictions.. lol

Okay, that wasn't the thing I was on about. Lol. Mia's actually alright. Not that she doesn't cause problems.. lol Shut up Nicole!

So you're not a fan, eh? Lol! I love reading your comments, I can so tell how you're feeling. I'm thinking not too happy right now? lol Oh btw, did you like Martha's Secret thingy? The Outcome?? Did you know that the reason why I wrote that fic, was because of you. Lol. I needed to try and trick you, so i had to do it Martha and Jack related, so you'd read it, and thats how (when I was ill and obsessed with tricking you lol) i thought of the storyline. That's why i made it sound like she was pregnant, so then you'd think it, and then say it! Lol. Because you always post what you think is going to happen, and you're always damn right! Lol. So I wanted to prove you wrong, and i did! Lol. So I'm happy! Mission Complete. I just hope it teaches you! lol I don't know how, but still. (Btw, you've gone and predicted something else in this fic, well done.. lol)

And then I told Nicole on MSN, and she thought to herself "What a nutter" lol How did I know that you were going to use alot of punctuation in your comment? lol When you're angry and "OMG-ish" then you always use lots of !!'s and ??'s. Lol. That's how I know how you react. Lol. And whilst I was reading the chapter earlier, I could just imagine how much you'd use them. lol

Lol! Martha's a mum! That was quite funny to read actually, sibling arguments.. can't beat 'em. lol Jessica?! What the hell does she want... lol Great! Update soon!

Lol. Me too. Thanks for the comments guys. I was just about to type "It'll be up later tonight" but i've just thought of something I've done wrong in it! Darn... Well, i'll have to wait till sister gets off computer to change it.. dang.. lol I'll try and get it up later.

Lol, I do now!!!! *gives evil eyes to dolly* lol I didn't like it before though.. I think it was because Mariah Carey sung it. lol I don't know what i've got against her... I like one of her songs, no wait two... now three!! lol. OMG I'm going to have to stop before I turn into a Mariah Carey fanatic.. lol :S If you dare make me like another Mariah Carey song dolly.... Ooh! Lets just say Small army will be making a return.. lol I'm going to go and put it on.. lol You've given me the urge.. lol Goodbye 'Mandy-Westlife'... Hello 'We Belong together-Mariah Carey' lol

Can I just add on the end of here, a little experience i had today, that I have to post here, for dolly-999. I had my iPod in, just humming to myself, when Mariah Carey - We Belong Together came on. And I didn't know why, but I felt a bit upset.. lol I was also getting confused thinking "Why do I like this song?" (because I hated her lol) and then it struck me. Your fic! Lol. The ending to it has made me sad when I hear this damn song, and I now like the song too!!!!! Lol. So thanks for that. *sarcasm* lol. AWw I'm thinking of this fic now... I knew I shouldn't have wrote this. lol Wasn't the ending to the last fic sad? It really was (not crying sad, just "AWww! No no no no" sad.) It was ace though.. ahh memories... lol. And to think, after that Jack went and got married! Tsk! The Martha thing must have really hurt him... because one minute they were in the middle of the dance floor, the next, he's off with an evil woman (who i'm starting to feel sympathy towards - why!? lol) Oh, and Martha's got a kid.. lol It's so sad... God Jack, just forgive her and get over it!! Plonker... lol I've got worked up now, and I'm involved in the story again.. lol I'll stop. Looking forward to next chapter though!! Lol. (..is anyone else starting to doubt my sanity? lol)

I'm speechless! That was incredibly wrote, but.... MARTHA!! WHAT THE HELL!? Why!? When you have Jack!? Why would you do it to us Jack? Lol I've officially fallen out with you Backtothebayrules! *folds arms* lol Aww! What will she say!? She can hardly say yes, because she's evil and has cheated on him. But then again, if she says no, poor Jack will be heartbroken! Even though it's enivitable that he's going to get his heart broken... Tsk! PLEASE update soon, as I'm dying here! Lol. I can't stop thinking! Aaargggh!

Next chapter is the last guys! I told you I'd do 5!!!

Thanks! Next chapter up later tonight.

Awww clever Jack!! lol Go on! Get in there my son!! Lol.. sorry, i don't know where that came from.. lol Great chapter! Please update sooooooooooooooooooooooooooon! EDIT: OH! And I forgot to say how well you did with Alf and Colleen's dialogue! It was like it was them! Lol. It was amazing! Well done! Really sounded like them.

OMG! Poor Martha! Awww. Stupid Sean!!! Grrr!! I'm still feeling sorry for Serena though, it's not going away! lol LOoking forward to next chapter!

Great! *shakes head* bad Jack. lol Very good bay girl!

I love how you all assume she's pregnant.

! Great! Who's 'he'? Evil Cassie! Tsk!

Yey! It's up! Been looking forward to this! And it seems like it's going to be a great fic! Not, that I'm surprised.. lol Secret? Hmmmm.... PLease post soon! Great start!

Oh! Beth, tell me!! Lol My god Lucas and Matilda! *tuts* lol. Aww bless! Great fic! My Gawd everyone feels guilty in that damn town! lol Looking forward to the next chapter!

Aww that was great! Now on to the sequel!

Wow thanks! That's alot of comments! Each one very much appreciated!! I shall try and post the next one on later, that's if I can get the next chapter proof read, by the amazing jackandmartha!!! . I've just realised, to write this fic I have to have "All Time Love" on repeat.. lol. Wierd.. lol Anyway, thanks for the comments!