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Oh my god! Evil Corey! lol Really looking forward to what happens next!

Now you're just thinking too far into it.. lol =P

Don't go with her! Close your eyes Martha! It's all lies!! Great chapter! =)

Lol! You are right. If only Martha could think like you.. lol This would have probably been near the end, but I realised that it was a bad thing him drugging her, and they couldn't just forget about that. Don't worry, it does end, eventually. lol

You say it Lukey boy! lol Great chapter! =)! Great story!

I think she'd like you to update it.. lol

Very good! =) Lol! I liked it how she blushed, found it kind of funny. =P Please post the final part tonight! =D You are a very good writer! I read Hold My Hand aswell, and that was as fantastic as this! =)

Wahay! Very good! And very original too! I haven't seen anything like this done before! And I like it! =)

Lol! Can I just ask why you'd think that it'd be called Undercover Cop 2 if there wasn't a first one.. lol It'd be a VERY random name then.. lol I guess I could have kept them all in one fic, but I figured that seen as though Jack was on a new mission, it should be a new thread. =) You don't have to read it, because it's quite long! lol However, at the end I'm trying to tie up all lose ends that I've created through Undercover Cop 1 & 2, so there'll be alot of references to the first fic. So prepare to be confused! lol

I think that was ACE! Please post the next chapter soon!! What tragedy? I'm getting worried now lol Please post asap!

Lol I noticed you reading Undercover Cop! lol Poor you, I bet that took you a while! lol

Lol! That would be quite cool... my text tone is my welsh teacher saying "google"! Lol He says it funny =P The only down side is when I leave my mobile on loud at night, and someone texts me, I jump up to my history teacher shouting google... lol. Pretty damn scary! =P (You may be wondering how we actually managed to get him to say 'google' whilst I recorded it on my phone.. I'll just say it involved a store room cupboard, and alot of strength keeping the door shut. lol)

Lol! Good point. Can you really imagine Alf being Jack's text pal though? lol

Lol. He can't, he's on a case, it would be very naughty of him indeed. And would also jeapordise ze case.

Oh My Goody God!! I just caught up with this fic, and I've been like " " All the way through! Lol My fave bit has to be this part though... "Hi gorgeous" Luc smiled opening his eyes. "Evening Sexy" his brother Jack laughed." From chapter 12! Lol. It made me giggle for quite a while, in fact, I couldn't continue reading until I stopped. Lol. I could just imagine it.. =P Great Fic! Please continue soon!

OMG That was ace! Please Post next chapter soon!

I never joke. *serious face* lol Next chapter's coming up soon...

Lol, theres me thinking you were a nice person, dear me was I far off the mark! All the baddies are fictional clones of Nicole! Lol! Yea, Trevor and Jenny are totally my twins! =P I knew it! I think I should be part of the Summer Bay police team then they might actually have some chance of solving a case! Lol! Ooh harsh, but true. =D

Lol, theres me thinking you were a nice person, dear me was I far off the mark! All the baddies are fictional clones of Nicole! Lol! Yea, Trevor and Jenny are totally my twins! =P

Lol. It's okay, I'll just kill Martha off instead lol

It's not true Linzie lol Erm, just thought i'd help clear up, Martha says shes not pregnant. There are other reasons why she's sick and stuff, but being pregnant is not an option for her. No way hooooozay! lol However, because Jack was out kicking butt, he still thinks she's pregnant

Aww I notice Julia hasn't got any fans! I can't for the life of me think why... lol I'll root for you Julie! =P Go Julia! Go Julia!

Lol! "The missing chapter!" =P That sounds quite cool! lol

OH yea, can you please post here when you've read it, so then I know when to post the next chapter! I'd prefer it if i knew that at least a couple of members had already read the 12.5 chapter, then I'll carry on. Thanks and sorry.

PLEASE READ! Ladies and Gentlemen! I have a problem! I've seemed to have not put in a chapter.... It goes inbetween chapter 11 and 12, as I had a mix up with something. It's long confusing story, but it was originally chapter 12, and things got muddled up. I won't go into the details, but I've put it on page 5, inbetween chapters 11 and 12. I advise you to read it. =D It explains why everyone is in the house, their own individual reasons to jump. And it also shows Callum's feelings towards Martha, Ryan and Christies reaction to it, and it kind of shows you why martha and Callum were holding hands when Jack walked in the room (to drug Martha) So it's called Chapter 11.5!!! and it's on page 5 Sorry for the inconvenience!