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Lol! Thanks. Theres another twist coming up actually.. lol

Lol! It doesn't mean that your theory was right. As it isn't. lol However, you're kind of talking about the right things... Anyway, I think I might post the next chapter soon because I'll end up making it more confusing than it actually is! lol

Hmmm... lol

Martha couldn't possibly be pregnant with Jack's baby. When would they have made a baby? lol The only time that could have happened was over a year ago in the story, and thats quite a while for a woman to be pregnant, especially if she's showing now bump! lol Also, Martha would know about Callum, or someone else would, as they all share the same room. (I thought i'd clear all this up instead of people getting confused.) So what other man in the last couple of months has Martha been around. Hummmm......? lol

Very good! You're a fabulous writer!

Lol! Sorry again! I can see how that'd cause confusion

EDIT: Mistake Made!

Lol! Aww your poor mum! I know what it's like! lol People still bring it back up to tease me! lol

I went to watch that at the cinema, and screamed when he was behind the door with the knife and grabbed onto the person next to me's arm! Lol! Apparently it was obvious he was going to be stood there, but that didn't help me, I was still petrified! lol To try and stop the embarressement I tried to joke around, and clapped when her dad shot him! (i think..) anyway, everyone in the cinema started to clap after I did! And then everyone clapped again when the woman told off the hotel guests and also when the credits rolled up! lol I was so pleased I'd started of a trend during the film! lol All because I was trying to forget about the embarressing thing I'd done to my friend Aaron! lol Oh, and I really didn't like it when she stabbed him in the neck with a pencil. It makes my throat go all wierd thinking about it! lol

Failure to Launch at the cinemas! It was great! Matthew McConaughey was nice! lol Shame about Sarah Jessica Parker.

Who was watching them!? And I never thought I'd say this but, I feel sorry for Corey! lol But it's still nice that Jack and Martha are together! Looking forward to next chapter

Very good, looking forward to next chapter

No! Bad Jack! Stop it! Stupid Rose!! lol Ok getting a liiiiiiittle too involved here.. lol Please hurry up with the next chapter, I'm just crossing my fingers that theres a good, reason behind them kissing! Like, they both had magnetic lips.... lol

Please update soon!

:o! Awww! I'd love it if she had a real freaky name! lol Awww She's not a stewart. Or maybe she is, she could have been swapped with...urm... her cousin! lol

! Please update soooon! :D

That was great! I could really imagine it!

Bravo! *clapping* Wow you're fast at updating chapters!

Anyone else what to slap this Jenny girl? *remembers she's a fictional character* Damn! Fantastic as usual, can't wait for more LOL! Thanks.

But you love him! lol Great! Looking forward to next chapter!

Awww so sweet! Glad your doing a sequel!

That was great!!! Can't wait til next chapter!

brilliant! I hope you carry on updating

Lol! Actually I am!

Really loved that!! Can't wait for the next chapter!