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OMG! Sean is mean! Dylan! Who the heck is Dylan!? :O I don't know why, but I'm feeling sorry for Serena right now. Please don't hurt Martha or the baby!! Great fic!! Update soon please!!

OMG this is great! I love this fic! Please hurry up with the next chapter!!!

OMG!!! Bay girl, you get writing the next chapter now!!!! Please. *sweet smile* OMG! That was BRILLIANT!!! I LOVED IT!!! Please update soon!!!!! You know if you don't, I'll seriously fall out with you . Please don't leave it long! Martha's like getting really ill, and poor Jack is very worried! Please!!?!!?!

Wow! Serena's got a bit of a bad history, ain't she!? I'm beginning to like Sean a little bit, even though he's planning to get Martha. Ha! I can't wait for something bad to happen to Serena! Lol. Update soon! Please It's fabulous!

My clever Jack has to realise that there's something up! If he doesn't... well, lets just say he'll be in big trouble. lol He has to go and sort Corey out! Show him who's boss! Give him a Knuckle sandwich, make him kiss his fist, introduce him to the power of his muscles, you know the stuff! lol. I'll be there, cheering him on. lol With pom-poms! lol How cool would that be! And you can do all the letters too. Give me a J-A-C-K. Yep. not like my name. I get stuck at the first letter! Lol. How would you do an N anyway? ... okay i got slightly off topic. lol Rambling!! Aarggh! Anyway, what I'm really trying to say is.. Love it. Update soon.

Loving it! Reading about Jack with someone else doesn't feel right though.. Stupid Serena. Wahay! Alliteration! Please update soon! Else I'll get the violent people out of my thread to come and get you with their sticks. Lol

I'm concerned about all the violent members on this site.. lol

Lol! Hmm, looks like I'm going to have to work hard to try and surprise you in this fic... Hmm Lol. It's a challenge... *thinks*

Empty your damn PM inbox. =D Lol (At least I didn't ramble, I got straight to the point! lol) Nevermind!! Ignore lil Nickowley! =D Woah! Go jackandmartha!!! fics! lol

Well done on such a great fic! Marvellous! =D I enjoyed every chapter of the 60-ish you wrote! So well written, and so interesting! I always loved reading them, and never thought "My god another one.." lol. You're such an incredible writer and I'm sure that everyone, like me, will be well chuffed that you're using your great fan-fic writing talent on another fic! =D Thanks for supplying me with hours of fun whilst reading your fan fic! It is very much appreciated! =D It's one of the best fics on here, and it's quite sad it will end!

Very good! *claps hands* I think Corey not taking the break-up too well is a bit of an understatement.. lol. Please hurry up with the next chapter! I want to know how they get out alive. They better god damn do!! lol Post asap! =D

OMG that was ace! I didn't see this coming! Tsk! I don't like stupid Serena already!! Jack your a fool! A fool I say! lol Married... I'll speak with you later... lol Very good! Yey I'm first one to read and reply! *does dance* Please post next chapter asap!

Oi! Jack! Say something! *tuts* Great chapter!! =D

Lol! Why would I do something stupid? Gee, you make it sound like I would seriously injure Jack so that he's got a 30% chance of living or something... *tee hee hee* =P

I feel so sorry for that woman Great fic though! Loving it! =D

Awww very good! ANOTHER great fic from you! =D

Oh my God! I knew you were an amazing writer but, wow! Lol. That was unbelievably great! The song! So fitted! I had to listen to it on iTunes after just to see (don't really know it that well, stupid Mariah Carey lol) and it so suited! Did you know that was going to happen? Or was it just a coincidence? Dolly, I think that was a hell of a better ending than any one with J&M getting back together. I still can't get over the song.. lol Right, I better answer the question before I start rambling of into an essay.. lol Yes! Write a sequel please! You're too great not to! And this story is too great to just leave it where it is! I really hope to see a sequel!

OMG! That was great!!!!! Please update as soon as you can! That was amazingly brilliant! Lol

I could hug you! Lol This is all going great!! Fantastic chapter!! Your a great writer!! Jack and Martha! Yey!!!!

I did write alot, didn't I? Oh my God! I can't stop rambling!! It's not my fault. *bangs head on desk* I'm angry with myself now! Lol

Bravo! Well done jackandmartha!!!

Agree with that! 2) I think it's quite obvious that no matter how you do it, Jack snd Martha need to get back together, if it doesn't happen i will understand but i will cry! (you don't want that on your concience do you) lol!! 3)You have, (like many other writers on this board) talent. Firsrly it's a j&m fic so of course i'm going to read it. Secondly, i'ts very hard to write a fan fiction that is interesting, doesn't give the reader exactly what they want, but also leaves room for hope that the ending they want is going to happen. And thirdly you obviously have a way with words because i can imagine the descriptions as i read them! Well I think jackandmarthaluver and bay girl summed up my feelings there as well. But just to add... firstly i don't hate Rose because she seems nice and she also pulled away second time when Jack was actually up for it () So I'm more angry at Jack! Actually I'm not lol I want to be but I can't be totally angry with him because it's just not possible! However, as bay girl said, kissing your bestfriend's boyfriend is completely wrong and for that Rose is not my favourite person right now! Secondly, I would like to see J&M get back together in the end. I love the fact that right now few things are happening as we would like them to and that's what makes it such a great story, but seriously practically everyone reading this fic wants it to be a happy ending! (let me specify: a happy Jack and Martha ending and that does not mean them as friends it means them together! lol ) Please! oo and let me tell you that if something bad happens at the end, unlike jackandmarthaluver I will not understand! Thirdly, what keeps me reading?? Well on top of the above, the story is different, original and you're a great writer who makes it all seem real and entirely possible. And obviously being a M&J fan I can't not read it! lol And it is one of the best M&J fics around! It's like everyone wrote what I was going to put, apart from the bit in red, which I don't agree with! =) I don't like Rose, not because she's stealing Jack away, it's because she knows that Martha loves Jack, she was there when she was all upset and stuff, but it's like she doesn't care. Rose doesn't sound like a nice person, I know I wouldn't want a friend like that. I really think you should get them two back together at the end (Jack & Martha) because if not then everyone will be upset! Lol. My army of small people will get you.... Of course, they may not get together, Martha might be hurt at his betrayal, Jack may be hurt because she practically forgot about him, but then when they spend the day together they'll realise what they've been missing for the last.. I don't know how long. lol Or I don't know, I'm starting to write my ending here!! Lol. I just think that you should really get them together at the very end. I'm up for arguing and such, but I don't like arguing when it's actually going to end horribly. =( I actually can't read fics that have people die in the end, as soon as I sense it coming up, I leave the fic! Lol. You may think it's sad, but it's not because I'm so mad that they aren't together, it's because I'm just really sad and don't want to cry! Lol. I won't cry if they don't get together, but you dare kill them off!! Lol. I've been reading this fic too long not to read it to the end! Lol. So there's a warning for you! =D I don't know why your fic is so addictive. It's a bit like a classic on this board.. Lol. It's been going a long time, and when I can only think of two fics that I class as "classics" and that's yours and AngelRose's. Well she's just stopped doing it, so yours is now the Classic! Lol. I loved the whole beginning, where she was a servant, and Jack couldn't help her etc. It's probably because it's so... Poor Martha, Hero Jack. Lol. It reminds me of Disney Films actually.. hmmm.... Lol. Anyway, it so worked! It like, clicked! Everyone wanted to know how Jack was going to save her, whether it'd be really sweet, or really heroic! So (going back to question 2 now lol) if you made it that Rose and Jack got together, or Jack and Martha didn't, then it'd ruin it quite a bit, it'd probably chuck out the window the main reason for the people on this board to read it! And that'd be a great shame because I wouldn't like this fic anymore, and I really would suggest anyone else to read it, just like I would do if AngelRose continued her fic... *mumbles* Lol. Sorry, I get angry easily! =D You had such a good base for this story, it'd be nice if you could give an equally as great ending too, something that relates to it, not just totally ignores it and gets Jack and Rose together! Lol. We began with Jack and Martha missing each other, (well they did somewhere near the beginning, i forget =P) so it just wouldn't make sense Jack going with her best mate! Lol.

OMG! That was fantastic!! It wasn't boring you muppet! Lol. I agree with jacknmarthaluver, I like the way you've changed around how his dad died too. Very good! Please update Soon!

Calm down girly! Lol. I'd run if I were you dolly-999, she might just get violent. =P She has a good point though! OMG! Why? It's a flippin Jack and Martha fic! Lol. I was quite sad when I was reading through, but one question remained in my head. "Are you a fan of Jack and Martha?" lol Great writing though! =D

LOL. Like hell I'm the best writer! There are loads of better fics on here than mine, I'm very tempted to name a few... and I'm going to give into temptation! Lol Well, there is.. Split Harry's Revenge In the Dark My Not-so-secret Life Some life for a princess hey? Meant to Be. Unbelievable Long Time Coming Cheating hearts and Psychotic Affections The Truth? The Pain and Don't Forget About Me. The writers are fantastic! A couple of great writers from those fics are coming to mind, I'll only mention one though (because if I say more than one then i won't stop lol), and that is sevenpuddings. Totally awesome writer. Not only has she got great creativity skills to think up of such great fics, she has an incredible talent in English. I proof read "Don't Forget About Me" and I'm always gawping at the screen at the high level she writes in. She is amazing!