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AWww! Very nice! Well done! Jack is ze hero!! Post soon!

. That's all I can say. Still mad that Serena isn't evil.. lol. I want Jack to hate her!! lol. But, getting her injured I guess is the next best thing. lol Update soon!! Well done Dolly!

Thanks! Really, now I'm wondering.. lol. Cheers.. OMG, you know when she fell, when you like repeated it from where Jack was sitting, I got goosebumps. I looked down at my arm, and asked "Why?" Lol. But, i still got them! And it sure as hell ain't cold in here!! Very good!! I loved it! Please update soon!

Even though I'd told myself not to read this fic, because of the events at the end of the last, I couldn't help myself.. I LOVED it!! Well done! He he! Can't wait till next chapter!

That's great!! Loved it!! Update soon! I was looking forward to this fic! he he

Awww! That was good! Poor Jack. I have to admit - in a wierd way i loved the bit about Lauren knocking over the picture. lol Please update soon! Laurens evil - and I love it! Lol

awww, don't be mad at Jack. I see why he did that, (probably because I wrote it lol), but I personally believe it was because he realised that Callum, the guy who is clearly insane and tried to kill him, is going now to see Martha. He wants to warn her because he loves her. And also, I think if you got stabbed in the stomach, you'd probably assume that you're going to die. He knows that by the time an ambulance got there, he'd have bled (sp?) to death. I think he knew he was going to die, that's why he told her to send Peter, not her. So what would be the point in him using the phone to call an ambulance, which probably won't help him, when he could save Martha? And then I totally contradict myself when he goes looking for a phone to call an ambulance.. lol. I think he's in denial then. lol "I'm not going to die.. ahhh"

I've fallen out with you now. (Loved how you got the titles in at the end! Very coooool! lol... .. but I still don't like you.)

Actually, I said Yet. Yet... .....Yet......

!! Go Martha!! Lol. Oh my God!! Please update like really soon! Please please!!!!? That was brilliant! I love this fic!!

Why leave it there!?! Lol. Grrrr... Great chapter though! I don't blame Jack yelling down the phone at her - I thought for what she was doing he was being quite nice! Lol. She deserves a good old slap, that'll knock some sense into her! Please update soon!

Wow! Well done! The blood pumping out of her wrist.. nice. lol. Well written! I also admire you for doing such a topic, I bet it was hard. Well done Dolly! *thumbs up*

Liked it? I loved it! Lol. Great! Really well done! I loved every moment of it! Fabulouso!! I really hope to be reading more from you very soon. (God I say that after every fic you write.. lol) Well done Miss Pringle!

lol! Yea, what XS-I-A-NX said! That was great!! What a fantastic fic! Well done! I hope to be reading more from you soon!

Don't shoot you fools!! Petrol!?! God, they're supposed to be preventing stuff like this happening! Lol. Aww Jack and Martha! Their wedding day! They better not die! lol Great though! I'm really liking this!

A PINK truck? I have to see that! Lol. Very good! Ooh! Jack & Martha's wedding day! ...but I'm guessing things aren't going to be happy happy.. lol Update soon!

! Update sooon!! Can't believe he's got a kiddy, aww bless... I'm still waiting for him to jump out a wardrobe.. lol. I'm starting to think that maybe that's not going to happen.. lol

Lol! Loved them bits! Great chapter!! Ooh, I'm looking forward to finding out her secret! Update soon!!

OMG your just like flipping BackToTheBayRules with the elipses! Lol Aww that was sad. Poor Sally. More soon though! We need to catch the crazy woman! lol

*Clicks gun* Serena just GO AWAY

! OOOHHH NOOOOO!!!!!!!! Maybe it's just someone who looks like Peter? lol Update soon!!

I bet Peter doesn't appreciate Cassie's new t-shirt designing hobbie. Lol Good chapter! Looking forward to the next!

Grrrreat! Loved it! Just a little message to David : You touch Jack, I'll kill you! Please update soon!!

Good question.. lol I can't believe how anti-Martha you guys are! Lol. I don't think I can turn it around.. :S lol But, in about... hmm let me think... 2 chapters, that's where the fun begins. Lol. He he he!

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW I had to have a kitkat whilst eating that.. i just felt the urge! Lol. That was brilliant! I'm so pleased you updated! Please update as soon as possible! Please!!! I need to know what's going on!! Please? Well done!