Nicom

OH My God! I'm sorry, but I can't talk to you now. I'm going to have to go. It was an ace written chapter, but I didn't like it.. lol J&M aren't together, and now Jack's a murderer... WHY!? Okay, I'm back. What the flipping hell did you do that for!?!?! I'm not happy.. What happened to the Jack and Martha who were clearly meant to be together at the start of this fic eh? The ones that everyone knew they were made for each other?? Where did they go!? And please say that Sean has a can of tomatoes in his pocket or something, and he jumps up and says "TRICKED YA!" Or maybe Jack's dreaming.. fell asleep at the wheel? Oh wait, that's bad! Lol. Erm.. okay, maybe he's just dreaming at home, in bed, nice and safe. Please. Lol.

He already knows mate! Lol. Great chapter! Loving it! Please update sooooooon!!!

Yey! Jack's going to be ok! Thank you! Lol I have to admit, I was seriously half expecting that Peter was freaking out because there was a spider in his room.. that'd be my reaction to a spider in my room. lol In fact, that was my reaction the other day... *embarressed* it's not my fault, it was HUGE! lol Anyway, enough of the beasts living in my house, and back to your fic. Great! Action packed! Loved it. One question though, Cassie? What's happened to her? I didn't know she was introuble! Not that I care.. lol Update soon!

Awww Rachel! Bless! Reeney! Nooo!! Lol As a Jack fan, I have to ask this - where is he? Please let him wake up! Lol Update soon!

You all make me larf! Lol. Actually, then again, you're all scary and concerning me. Lol. What's with the fascination with chain saws? I blame you bay girl, you're a bad influence! Lol. I think we should all calm down.. okay? lol Don't make me split you up!! Lol. *wiggles finger* I'm warning you! I don't want to ground you all, but I will do it! lol

I hate you and your damn cliff hangers.. lol Please update soooon! :D

Martha's Secret?! I need to know what it is!!!! Lol. Please update soon! Very good chapter!

I'm sorry, but I have to say this... Like hell you did bay girl! lol That was a flipping surprise! (A brill one though! ) Nothing you did hinted at it, you'd even said something happened at the end of the last fic, but this sooo didn't pop into my head!! Lol. I love it! And I giggled a fair bit too! Lol. Imagining them drunk... ahh, the beauty of alcohol! Lol. (Not that i drink it lol) Please update soon!

Hmm, i don't know. But it's a challenge. Lol.

Poke him in the eye! Both fingers, both eyes! Then, kick him in the goolies (as Martha said lol. How can I remember that!? :S) and slam the door on his face! Where the hell has Jack got to! God... now is not the time to go off on your own! Stupid man! Lol. Please update soon! :D

Lol but in her defence (why am I defending her?? lol) who else was it supposed to be? Tony or Lucas' new girlfriend? Lol. She didn't know Peter was living there, or that Tony and Lucas had gone off with Alf. I'm feeling quite sorry for Martha myself. So misunderstood.. lol

Loved it! UPdate soon!

Bravo! It's ace! Go BackToTheBayRules! (God that's alot to say! Lol. Going to have to refer to you as Bob in the future.. lol ) Keep it going!

Oh god! Please don't leave it there!!!! Please! Please! *begs* please! Great chapter! But why is Serina being nice!? Lol. I'm desperately hoping she's up to something.. lol

Okay, at the beginning of that, I thought Jack was cheating on her - was going to rip his throat. (Omg, that just made me feel sick.. lol My neck itches now... :S) But . Uh-Oh! Someone's after Martha! Dum dum dum!! I wonder what Jack did... Hmmm... *strokes chin* More soon please!

Okay, not sure what to think! Lol. Beginning was great.. but the ending? Why is he with Rachel!? They sound pretty... together. lol Please update soon so I know what the hell is going on! Lol Very good writing though!

not necessarily. It says next installment will be the last. Haa haa! sorry I like keeping people in suspense! lol. well i must say that im glad that that wasnt the end and i must say home much i loved the ending apart from the fact that now it has ended so there will be no more which would be sad as you are a great writer especially about jack and martha my favorite couple in the world so please write another one prephaphs that goes on cause it is so sweet, but make it longer cause then it would nt end so fast, also, im confussed, is this a carryon one cause if it is then what is it carrying on to but if not i really liked it as itself on its own if oyu know what i mean. bacially what i am trying to say is that it was really good but ended to soon apart from me thinking that it ended before it had actually ended and me wondering if it was a sequal... wow im out of breathe just writing this all, please if this is now the end write another and if its not (even though i think it is) update soon cause i have really enjoyed it and think that the idea was so nice that jack gave martha back the photo engraved awwwwww. i thought he was going to give her a promise ring cause it isnt that he hasnt loved her the whole time that would have been cute so i might go and write my one story now, but i prefere your idea with the photo and im so glad that jack is going to be 'daddy' to marthas baby. awwwww *Collapses on the floor* That's the last time I try and read someones post outloud! Lol. God I think you're a nicole! Lol. I'm sorry, but you might actually be cursed with the deadly "Ramble" Disease. My sorrows. I'll have to form a support group if this disease spreads.. lol

AWwww!! If you could see me now, you'd be thinking -"What a freak" lol AWw it made me smile and want to giggle alot!! Tee hee hee! Lol That was so sweet! I love how you brought the photo back into it. That was a very nice touch! Lol I don't want to open my mouth to speak because I think I'll just let out a hugh sigh. You know, the "Ahhhhh" Sigh. Lol. AWw that was so cute! You better be writing another J&M fic Ms Pringle! Lol

Well, I can't exactly moan at the ending of that can I! Lol. That was awesome! I loved it. They kissed. Aww bless Please update soon though! lol. (Oh and you were right, I would have killed you lol)

I think that I hate you! lol Awww, why leave it there? Just WHY!? You could have been nice, and kept going for a while, and left it somewhere totally, I don't know, somewhere NOT like that!!! Please update real soon! Else, I don't know what I'll do! Lol. Please please please oh please! *cough* Evil *cough* lol

You know what, just for you, I'll post the next chapter! Lol. I'll go read through it again, then I'll edit this post. EDIT: Enjoy! Chapter 25 “It’ll only be for a couple of days, just until I get somewhere permanent sorted out.” Peter explained. “Yea, well it best be, my dad and Lucas will be back in about 3 days, and I’m not too sure how my dad will take me inviting people to live with us.” Jack explained. Peter nodded. “I’ll be out by then, don’t you worry!” Peter exclaimed. He threw his bags in the spare room, and followed Jack out to the living room. “So, how’s life?” Peter asked, whilst resting on the sofa. Jack didn’t exactly want to talk about it, nor did he want to lie, so he decided to just change the subject. “Do you know if I can come back to work yet?” Jack asked. Peter shook his head. “I don’t I’m afraid. But what I do know is that someone should be coming over today to tell you. Mia, is it?” He asked. Jack nodded. “Yea. Mia.” He confirmed. Mia; the partner of his who left him to complete their paperwork out of shift hours; therefore forcing him to cancel dates with Martha. However, even though he’d like to blame her for his break up, he couldn’t, as he had accepted to do the paperwork and kicked up no fuss over the matter. “So, how’s that girlfriend of yours Jack? Managed to come up with a way to propose yet?” Peter asked. Jack’s face dropped, he wasn’t prepared to even think about his plan to propose, let alone talk about it. He collapsed on the sofa, and rubbed his head with his hand. “Well, we kind of split up.” Jack said. Peter sighed with sympathy. “I’m so sorry mate!” He said. “God, we’re a pair aren’t we?!” Peter laughed. Jack forced a smile and nodded, but unlike Peter, he wasn’t ready to laugh about his situation just yet. He found an excuse to leave, and headed towards his room. He rested on the bed, staring at the ceiling. The subject of all his thoughts was either Martha or Callum, and it was definitely affecting him. He slapped his hands on his forehead. “Stop thinking!” He ordered himself, but it was no use. Martha was still pictured in his brain. He looked around his room; immediately spotting the photo frame on his bedside draws. He picked it up and held it tightly in his hand. They were so happy together, before all the Corey, Dave, Jenny, Trevor and Callum business. Why did it have to happen to them? It felt as if their relationship was doomed with all the bad luck they’d received. He knew no other couple that had suffered so much in such a short period. “Well, at least it’s over now.” He sighed, dropping the photo to his side. His thought was followed by a knock at the door. “Come in!” He shouted, shoving the photo frame underneath his pillow. He was shocked to see Martha and Callum stood in his door way. So shocked, that he didn’t even move from his bed; he just stared at them, trying to figure out what the hell was going on. Jack looked down their arms; they were holding hands. He sat up in his bed sharply; he was so confused. Why would Martha and Callum come and visit him? And why were they holding hands? "What-" He began, but was cut off by Martha's explanation. “Jack. I know this is going to be hard for you to understand, but this afternoon, kissing Callum, being with Callum, waking up with Callum; just felt right, you know? It felt as if it was the best thing for me, the best thing ever…” She said. Jack was sat up in his bed, unable to take his gaze off their laced hands. “You’ve got together with Callum? We only broke up a few hours ago!” Jack exclaimed. “I guess I couldn’t wait around any longer, my feelings weren’t going to change, and I had nothing standing in my way. I know this is hard for you Jack, and I do still like you a lot, but it doesn’t compare to the love I feel for Callum.” She said, looking up into Callum’s eyes lovingly. “I love you Callum.” She said, Callum smiled. “I love you too.” He replied gently, pulling her closer and passionately kissing her. Jack had now sunk down into the bed, so his head was resting on the pillow. He lay there; confused at what emotion to experience. Should he be confused, hurt or angry? The answer was all 3. He felt a wide range of emotions that he couldn’t bear. The impact of the thoughts rushing through his mind was enough to send a single tear trickling down his cheek. He looked the other way, as the loving pair continued kissing next to him. They slowly realised what state Jack was in, and decided to leave him in tears, fixed to his bed. Jack awoke with a start, breathing in heavily and looking around the room. “It was a dream.” He sighed, resting his head back down on the pillow. He thought about his dream; it had seemed so realistic. As he lay quietly, thinking his dream through, he realised that the possibility of it actually coming true was very high, as Callum would probably get what he wants in the end; Martha. He’d have to prepare for Martha dating again, Martha moving on with Callum, as it was inevitably going to happen. “Maybe if I tried to move on first?” Jack thought aloud. But the idea of being with someone else made him sad; he didn’t want to be with anyone else but Martha. He then drifted back off to sleep, unaware that he was going to have the same awful nightmare repeated in his head on loop, every time he closed his eyes for the next week.

Awwww, Jacky! He still loves her! Martha, it's clear you like him, so comon woman, do something about it! You know what I didn't like about that chapter, the part where it ended! Lol. I was cursing and muttering under my breath, angry that you'd ended it!! Lol. I hate reading your damn chapters, because they ALWAYS make me want to read more!! Lol Damn you! You're like pringles - Once you Pop, you can't stop! Lol. Except you're not exactly popping, you're writing.. Hmm, I'll think of a rhyme that goes with that! Lol. Please update soon Mr/Ms Pringle! Lol. EDIT: Just wanted to make clear, this is a compliment! Lol. I just thought, I'd used the words "what I didn't like about that chapter", and that sounded harsh.. lol. It was a compliment! Honest! Lol. It'd be extremely difficult for me to criticize your fics.

That was great! Aww bless. Poor Martha. I wonder what'll happen.. :S Update sooooon!

But I could be wrong, and I don't want to look like a fool! lol) That was great though! Well not great, some idiots hurt Martha, but..you know what I mean though! Lol. Update sooon! I wonder what Jack will do? Thanks. It is now a sequel yes. It wasn't going to be but I've realised it all fits. So yes it is *Dances* I'm pleased. Lol. Hurry up with next chapter! I'm all happy now! lol

! Omg!! (Can I just ask one thing, is it a sequel? Lol. Because I'm thinking yes.. But I could be wrong, and I don't want to look like a fool! lol) That was great though! Well not great, some idiots hurt Martha, but..you know what I mean though! Lol. Update sooon! I wonder what Jack will do?