Nicom

OKay you changed the damn secret. lol Tsk! Still great secret though! Loved it!

It's alright Martha, you don't need to. I know, that's all that matters. *rubs it in a bit more* lol. Great! Well done!

Can I just make an announcement... I KNOW THE SECRET!! Neh neh!! *sticks tongue out* Oh yes, Nicole is brill.. lol

step 4) Punch in stomach

I'd like to change part 4. 4) Kick It will carry on getting more violent until you wake Jack up, and TELL US THE GOD DAMN SECRET.

Awww. Very sweet! I enjoyed that!

AWww.. happy endings are so sweet. Well done.

..I've totally forgotten about this fic!! Lol. God.. I'm such a plonker! Well.. I've written the next chapter but I REALLY need to go back over it.. and I've got to revise.. so.. Nicole estimates that the next chapter should be up on tuesday. Sorry for forgetting!

You're just jealous because you didn't think of the plan. Bell's in! Lol. We'll call ourself - Team Great. Lol.

Here's my plan: 1) Train it down to BTTBR-house (obviously find it first lol) 2) Knock on door 3) Wait for an answer 4) Poke 5) Run away with hands waving in the air Good plan nicole...

Okay, when the hell are we going to find out about Martha's secret? *angry face* lol It was great!! Well done! Very sweet! Update sooN!!

That was.. great. I want to use the word "beautiful". It was so.. warm and nice. Proper like granddad and grandaughter. It has actually made me a bit sad, but in a good way. Well done. You've actually made me quiet. lol.

Bite her Martha. Bite her.

Great!! Loved it! Well done!

He better flippin not!! Lol. You know if he does die, I ain't going to be a happy bunny. lol. Great though! Superb! Loved it! (How many compliments are you getting from me? lol) Keep it up!

*Blocks out Lauren* Awww that was a great chapter!! So sweet.

Great! PLease update soon! I really enjoyed reading that.. I just thought I'd tell you. lol. I didn't want it to end..

Dream, dream, dream.... *rocks back and forward* please be a dream... GREAT chapter though! I was very pleased when I saw you'd updated! (Nice av btw! lol! )

Great! Update soon!

That was great! Well done! Very cute!

Couldn't have put it better my self!! Please update soon!!! I need to know what her secret is!!

That was jackandmartha!!! *points and jumps* Ha ha! You're in trouble, you're in trouble... *chants*

NO! You can't lose him! Please update soon!!!! I love this fic, it's awesome!!

That was just harsh. I need to find some new friends. lol

Okay, maybe I would have preferred you have left it at the other cliff hanger, instead of this!! Lol. Damn it, why didn't I realise you'd updated BEFORE you went? Oh well, when you get back, i expect another chapter! Lol. Please!? Hey! You know if I'd have said that, you'd have called me sick. lol. Oh, and mean, and evil!!! Yes well you see.........i was going to put *sarcasm* at the end of it but i figured MOST people would be able to figure that out, silly me:P So i now have the chance to do what you did to me, a while back (believe me i've been waiting for this, lol) Nicole your a FOOL!!! Actually, it's not my fault you weren't clear to understand. And also, I didn't think you were being sarcastic because I actually felt the same. I thought it was perfect. lol. You need drama in a fic, and you couldn't get more drama than what BackToTheBayRule's gave!! Lol. So there... I suggest you subtract "Fool"... Else Nicole will get nasty.. lol Jk. I don't have a "nasty" mode. Just "sarcastic" and "great".