Nicom

OMG I officially don't like you. You're using elipses.. And Martha's really happy with this Carl dude. I bet he's a minger. lol.

I feel sorry for Jack. *hides from krys-topher* He should have done better, but I still feel sorry for him. Great start, I'm sure the other 9 will meet the same standards! Lets see shall we? Bring on Chapter 2!

Heylooo! Great stuff. I liked the Martha and Jack bed thing. (The thing with her waking him up... not the thing that followed. lol. I'm not a creep) It was sweet. Gotta love Jack. More soon! (I can't type too much because my arm is killing!!! You should see me on msn with krys, i just keep saying random words as she rants on about Jack. lol. ) Lol sorry but there just too happy!!!!!!!!!! somethings bound to go wrong!!!! *hides* I know, I feel the exact same way. I don't trust that Bay Girl.. lol

Okay, sorry for the lack of updates. I couldn't get on my sisters comp, but good news - I've got a comp now!! Yess.... Unlimited hours. Kerching! SO, I'll be updating later today. Also, I don't know if I made it clear, but they've not broken up, they've just had an argument. lol. You'd know if I broke them up..

A new one. lol. Jack doesn't know Henry Hunter... and Jack knows this Henry Guild rather well. lol.

What she said *points* Don't you know that it's rude to point Nicole?! Ha ha ha ha ha ha... *glares*

Thanks. You should be scared.. it doesn't turn out that great in the next few chapters. You had your fluff... you can't say I don't give you nice things! Lol. But now, I'm going to go back to Nicole. Mwa ha ha.. Well, i'm going to rule out the Ben thing, before I am tempted to do it... soo... BEN IS DEAD!! But you are right, ANYTHING is possible in my fics, and the unrealistic happens. And it will happen.. lol. What can I say, I like over-the-top-unrealistic drama! I might update soon... Depends, I want to collapse right now... I've been on work experience all day.. 8.45-5.30 in a shop... urgh. lol. Well, it'll give me experience for when I'm a doctor...

What she said *points*

Comon super Lara, you have save Jack and Peter! Update soon.

Ahh, I see whats going off... Annie, are you competing against my Proof Reading Thread? Well, girly, you best watch out, 'cos my Proof Reading army will kick your Writer's Block gang! Watch your back. Lol - just kiddin'! I wanted to act "hard". lol.

What a smashing fic. Brilliant stuff girly. Well done. However, a sequel is vital. Sevenpudd's, I disagree majorly. Leaving people guessing is not a good thing!! I want to know what happens! *stamps feet* This is going to be one of those things that I'll never stop nagging you about you know? Aren't you glad you wrote this fic? lol. Seriously though, fantastic piece of writing. I enjoyed a piece of writing that wasn't JM! Fancy that.. lol.

We were soo close.... How come the 'drinks after work' seem so far away right now?

Unfortunately the "awwww"'s and "Yay!"'s in posts kinda spoilt the surprise for me, but it was LOVELY to read. Awwww.. I'm smiling. lol He he..

Ahh, thanks for clearing the 'where they conceived' thing up. I'm soo glad I asked... *sarcasm* Lol.. well, it's sure different! Awww... Jacky! I'm trying to work out where you're going with this fic.. but I have no idea. lol. You said a couple of pages back that you had plans... and I don't like the way you said it. This better end nicely!

Sorry, but i don't accept bribes. LOL What about blackmail? Found the dinner topic hilarious... and I felt sympathy towards Tony and Lucas with the whole 'where the baby was conceived' dialogue. But, freakishly, I was quite intrigued. lol. Damn Tasha, why'd she stop speaking!? lol. *thumbs up*

I am a bit angry! But it was sweet. They were mentally-kissing.

Yes, that's what I wanted to say. I just ended up rambling a bit... I feel dumb. I don't know what that means. And GlowingAngel, if you rememeber, Jack had trouble forming a bond with Grace. So you don't have to worry about him having any on going feelings for the child. He didn't want her to be his, and now that she isn't, he's happy. Yes, it sounds mean, but it's my story and i'll do what i want. LOL. It's similar to GET IN MY SON!! But... shortened. You know when you do an elbow dig... and you like shout YESS!!!! - It's pretty much to that effect. Lol. Just means I'm rather happy and going hysterical in front of the computer screen. EDIT : Oh update! Best read! EDIT #2: Well, I've now found a new heaven. Poptarts and baygirls fic! Beautiful! That was great. Loved the Kim/Kit bit.. made me chuckle. She did sound rather wise... lol I'm sorry, but I've actually forgotten all they have to work through... it's the Megan stuff.. I'm still angry at her. lol. So.. what do they have to work through? I think it's safe to say that Martha has trust issues. She's scared of getting hurt. Add that to the recent death of her father and Megan's antics; it's made her wary (sp?) of letting people get close. You know? So until she can get over that; she doesn't want to be with Jack. ^^^^^Oh yes, and she's completely stubborn. And yes, where the hell is LinzieMac. I haven't seen her around in yonks. I want some more of her fic. It was one of my favs. Come back LinzieMac, come back. Ahh I see! *hits head* That was obvious. Duh!! Lol. I loved her fic too! She just.. disappeared without warning. Maybe we should make posters? lol.

Can i just ask, who else misses Linzie_mac01? She's... gone! Lol. I thought of it the other day.... where has she gone?

Damn right you missed him!! Just kiss! You know you want to. lol.

Yes, that's what I wanted to say. I just ended up rambling a bit... I feel dumb. I don't know what that means. And GlowingAngel, if you rememeber, Jack had trouble forming a bond with Grace. So you don't have to worry about him having any on going feelings for the child. He didn't want her to be his, and now that she isn't, he's happy. Yes, it sounds mean, but it's my story and i'll do what i want. LOL. It's similar to GET IN MY SON!! But... shortened. You know when you do an elbow dig... and you like shout YESS!!!! - It's pretty much to that effect. Lol. Just means I'm rather happy and going hysterical in front of the computer screen. EDIT : Oh update! Best read! EDIT #2: Well, I've now found a new heaven. Poptarts and baygirls fic! Beautiful! That was great. Loved the Kim/Kit bit.. made me chuckle. She did sound rather wise... lol I'm sorry, but I've actually forgotten all they have to work through... it's the Megan stuff.. I'm still angry at her. lol. So.. what do they have to work through?

GET IN!!

Just caught up, great fic. Made me laugh. Lol. Well done! God, Tasha's a crazy. And Robbie.

Awwww *giggles* Why am i giggling? I'm going all wierd... *deep breath* He he, you two better get your acts together!

Thanks everyone. Can I just say, the reason why I had to re-do the end (if you can all remember those weeks back when I said that I had to) was because I broke JM up. I'd got so mad at Tasha and Jack, I broke both the couples up, and left it as Jack was moving away. lol. After some cool down time and a talk from jackandmartha!!! I decided to change it. But.. Tasha and Robbie still broke up, because I don't like Tasha.