Nicom

Lol, s'ok, Annie and Krystal say A LOT worse. Believe me. I'm trained up against verbal abuse now..

Cheers. lol. You do realise you're not helping yourself out? And can I just ask everyone - why do you think Martha will necissarily care that Jack went wrong? Jack came in to save her, and.. sure he screwed up, but by accident! I also think Martha will have more important things on her mind.. like dying. lol. The chapter will be up as soon as its proof read. -ish

Awwww So cute. Great chapter!

The clever thing to do would be to go in.. not stand at the door going "Oh, that was a gun shot! Cool." Actually, then again, it wouldn't be so clever... :S I didn't see THAT coming let me tell you! I thought the robber would come after Jack. Lol. Well, this is all wowza, but I want to know why you're doing it....

You have to admit it is funny? He's such an idiot.. lol. Don't worry, she's not dead.

*party poppers*

To be honest, I don't have a flippin' clue. Oh wait, I do have an idea.... It's like the show! Martha and Jack squabbling over him working late... it's just a universal problem for Jack isn't it? He can't get it right in the programme, nor in fics. It's causing him more damn grief.. maybe he should quit. More soon!

I wasn't aware she was preggers. lol. Double shocker for me! Wahay! Get in my son!

Your planning something, and I won't like it one bit. I know this fic is going to end badly.. I know I keep going on about it, and it's not like you've commented on it... but I can tell. You've wrote numerous GREAT fics, all of which have BRILLIANT endings. You're going to do a sad one now... I know you are. But I'm going to try my hardest to stop you, because you're happy endings are FABULOUS! So please, do a happy one. Great. I sat there trying to understand the dream - I failed. lol. Hmm... seems to me like Martha hasn't totally overcome that thing with everyone leaving her. She needs some more psychiatrist sessions me thinks.

Oh my god stop being annoying and just carry on. You don't get a comment until you let me in on what the hell is going on!! I hope it's what Jack hope's it is... but I doubt it highly. lol.

Er, yeah, I kinda missed Home and Away today...and I'm going to Meadowhall tomorrow to do a bit of shopping so I also miss the repeat...But, blame bay girl for her fabulous writing! Once I started, I just felt I had to carry on... (I hope that's a good enough excuse; I usually watch Home and Away religiously lol) Thanks Nicole! I agree! lol MEADOWHALL!? Damn you. I love that place. I hardly go though.. mums too lazy to pop on the motorway. lol. (and too scared) I'm going to learn how to bus it there one day... Sorry, I got excited. lol. The New Look there is HUGE. I used to love the bottom floor, all 915!! Now I can fit into adult stuff. *smug face* And they have a glass lift, which I always find cool... Meadowhall is brilliant. They have a McCafe! First and only one I saw... it's brilliant. I'll shut up now. lol. EDIT: I've just thought of another "Only at Meadowhall" thing. Only at Meadowhall do you have those three 11 year old girls peering over the rail on the second floor, 'accidentally' dropping dairy milk mcflurry down below at the ground floor. He he.

*claps* You officially have no life. Lol, jk

Wahay! Bingo and a half!

But for how long'? Bay Girl, seriously, be nice. *points* I mean it, I won't be a happy girly if you end this fic horribly!!

But if I let you go I will never know What my life would be Holding you close to me Will I ever see You smiling back at me Oh yeah How will I know If I let you go ... If I Let You Go -Westlife Sorry, that was my instant reaction.

God your cruel. Sure, I shoot them, I make them angry, I make them yell etc. But you, what your doing to Jack is far worse! lol

Hey guys, thought I'd poke my head in! I've got a little adviceyness! So I'm going to try and be clever and say it normally. Don't try writing when you're not in 'the mood'. It never works, you go back and think "What the hell did I write that for?" and you only delete it anyway... Well, I do. I totally agree with sevenpudd's, I watch romantic/comedys (As I have several) and they really put you in the mood! Of course, there's always a bit of anger/pain in the movie (which I love), humour (Makes you smile and laugh) and then... the romance. (Makes you smile and giggle.) And then after you watch it, you're all like "ahhhh" so its a perfect mood to write! Unless you're just about to brutally attack the characters in your fic.. I have another idea too, try writing about something different. Recently, I've been trying to challenge myself. With the short 'Martha's Secret' fic (That was a challenge and a half! lol) it took a lot of power to write something sad let me tell you!! And now with my current fic, Returning Emotions. I started with... fluff. Yes, fluff. I sounded like a sop, with all the "i love you"'s and there was barely any anger! I'm not a sop person, so this was really hard for me to do. But, I wanted to try different things... Later on in this fic, of course, I get some of my old anger scenes back... but I'm still going to try and keep up with the occasional sop.. even though it won't be as it seems. *wiggles eyebrows* Then I'm going to involve some flashbacks, and develop some different feelings that Jack wouldn't normally have in fics.. Martha usually has them. The whole fic, (after an event soon) is going to be a bit of a flip from a normal JM fic layout, because that'd make it a bit different, and a bit stranger for me to write. I think challenging yourself is great! Nice and fun. It makes stuff different, and gives you the motivation to carry on and challenge yourself, because you know you're actually achieveing something.

sevenpudd's.... reading my fic? Awww crap. It's bad enough when Bay Girl reads it, now I got sevenpudd's to impress. Geesh. lol.

Uh-Oh. End good, please end good!

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