Well, that is important to remember, but not the direct thing I'm indicating too. But it is important, so don't blank it! lol. The dialogue... the dialogue... It really depends how well I write it though - it may be glowing, or it'll be very subtle.
I'm starting to think you are actually the only person who reads this. Should I just send it you? Bypass all the other members, and you can have the chapters privately? Yea.. it could just be Amber's fic...
Nah, I'm just kidding guys. Don't think that I'm not oh so grateful for your comments, as I really love to read them! Makes me smile.
EDIT: Oh, I've been meaning to ask... what's with the spaces before you post? You press Enter like a couple of times.. why? Is there a reason, or does it just make you feel "complete."? No arguments from me either way, just curious.
Jack4Martha - hadn't really noticed, but you're right! I'll have to build him a church. =)