Nicom

Lmao!! I have a silent laugh right now, my mouth's just in a massive, open grin shape and my belly hurts. I'll edit this after I've been out. (And hopefully stopped with the silent laughter) EDIT: Great chapter. As you can see, it made me laugh. lol. Picture this. After I came on here, I went to the hospital. Because you're only allowed 2 visitors per bed, and there were 3 of us, I had to go sit out in the corridor for a while, on the worlds comfiest sofa. Well, as I tried not to fall asleep (I seriously was nodding off, i had my eyes shut and everything, then I opened them and tried to act natural when I heard anyone's shoes) and then this fic shot in my head... and I began to smile... and i got the same pain in my stomach. Silent- laughing pain. lol. I was cursing you, Amber. But then thanking you at the same time. I was out there all alone and lonely for over half an hour! So, it gave me some amusement - along with the nurse who couldn't get into the staff room. ANYWAY, as you see I'm in the rambling mood.. lol, I'll just say "Looking forward to the next update"

Yes, it's one of my favourite things to do. Next to being stabbed of course. Well, I was going to come on here to tell you about my next update, but seen as though this thread has taken a dramatic, violent turn against me, I don't think you deserve it. You can all blame Annie. Nah, jk. I've wrote the next chapter, but I really want it proofed. So... as soon as I can force someone to proof, it'll be up.

Aww! That was great! I don't have much to say.. too busy chomping through an apple. lol Only - don't people have school to attend? Loads of people have posted since 11am... please don't say I was the only one who went back to school.

Actually, I didn't delete a kiss.

Awww, I loved it. Bootiful!

That was flipping amazing. God you're brilliant. Seriously, wow! You had me believing she was a "slag" then. I was really convinced, then I realised "Crap, Nicole, you're supposed to feel sorry for her!!" Then I did feel bad for her. And I LOVED the ending. Thank god she still loves Jack. I can sleep now. lol. That was incredible writing. Every single word. Description, dialogue, directions.. everything! I seriously can't tell you how good that was.. just, wow.

You're so soppy it hurts! Well as you know, I'm not a baby person. I do like them, but nothing really fascinates me with them. Which is why I'm not a JM baby person i think. That's why it took me so long for me to come around to reading it.. Well let me just say, you so made it work! I'm not so against JM babies now! It was so cute and adorable, and made me smile. Aww, it was lovely. Well done Krys! Update Harry's Revenge.

Awww. Poor Jacky. Okay, I'm either really tired, or a complete freak. I feel really sad now. Damn you Amber. And how come you use the word "alright"? When I try to flippin' use it my Word Processor tells me off. I knew it was a word! Stupid ass computer... Update soon!

No exclamation marks again. I'm impressed. Emma, I got the name from there. When the name 'Richard' popped in my head, I knew why. lol. He's my inspiration! - Even though I didn't really watch BB7. lol. But, this Richard isn't bald and super muscley. Gawjuss_tiff, well... I have nothing to say to you. lol. I just thought I'd write your name up here... for the hell of it. I didn't update today because I've been busy (Xmas Eve) and I won't tomorrow (Xmas Day) but maybe I'll post on boxing day... Hmm.. who knows! I know y'all don't mind, you'll all be out "Christmassing it up!" Merry Christmas everyone.

Awwwwww Can I just say, I actually have heard of someone who went through a very similar thing. Of course without Belle and Jack. In my lovely area someone had the same thing done, one of my Mum's friends from work. I was quite weirded out when I started reading the knife part, because that's what he'd done. Sick. But I'm not going to go into the details and stuff, because... 1. It's sick. 2. It's very sad. and 3. I'm supposed to be reviewing your fic!! See, this is what happens when you write a sad one shot! Don't do it again! Instead, write a happy one shot. Nice work.

Awwwww! So cute. But sad. But cute. Thank you for posting here! Thanks to Krystal for telling you to. (Yes, I've heard. I think Krys is quite proud of herself) Please, continue posting your fics here. They're brilliant.

Lol! Thanks. I applaud you for having so much will power! I wouldn't read back through it. Thanks for reading though, and commenting. Much appreciated.

Awww that was great! Brilliant! You should so write more fics! I think you might do actually on HAAC, but unfortunately I don't go on there because I forget. So... you need to post them on here. Understood? Merry Christmas.

Awww. I feel quite sad now.

Lol. You'll see...

Yeah I had that image too! And I laughed when it said she took off hr thong lmao! I was thinging huh? LOL! When I realised what it actually meant it made me laugh so much! LOL Yea, I did that too! Damn Aussie speak...

No. I wanted to. Great, you've just spoilt it for me. *claps sarcastically*

OMG! He did!?

yes, Oh my god indeed. What happened to the sweet Nicole, who wouldn't dream of such a thing?! Lol! I don't know what's happened to me... I blame the hormones!! (I always do..)

I didn't get confused... I thought you were referring to the spider as a "he" on purpose, to emphasise that it was very important to Jack. And I liked how you did the criminal as "that guy" too, showing that Jack wasn't really that bothered about who the criminal that was holding his wife at knife point was... It really made it seem like to me Martha and this Criminal were blurry in the background, and Jack and the Spider in the foreground. That's another reason why I really liked it. It was written superbly. I'm babbling.

! Awwwwww! Plain fluffy-ness would have been fine!!! But I loved it! It was great! Awww... But hell, I'm biased. He was quite heroic. I can imagine him ripping off his shirt now... Oh my God Nicole.