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Oh my god! This is one of the funniest things I've read in a long time! Proper belly laughs! Thank you! Loved everything about it! Lol! Casey asking if they can still have sex at end was just the icing on the cake! Brilliant!

Oh, that's such a lovely ending. I'm so glad for Kyle that he's going to get to be a dad. My heart melted when she called him 'daddy'. Sage is a lovely name

Thanks Pembie Really glad you liked it! To be honest, I'm not really that into gory horror movies. At least, I don't really watch a lot of them. Given some of the stuff that I've written though, maybe I should give them more of a go! lol! Maybe I'm a gory movie fan and I just don't know it! haha! 'Wack a doodle'! Love it! haha! He is that alright, but then, so is Andy! I really enjoyed writing that opening scene with Emerson and the utter chaos of it all. The two of them roaring loudly at each other in a quiet room just seemed funny to me. It made me laugh, so I'm glad other people found it funny too. Kat aint the brightest, you'd be right there! Sneaky, sneaky Hunter... Thanks a million for taking the time to comment. It means a lot, really!

Thanks RR1 I thought it would be funny for Emerson and the other cop to be confronted by a totally bonkers Andy (leaving absolutely no doubt in their minds that he'd lost it) and they'd do absolutely nothing about it. Just playing along and shouting at him as he covered his ears... Lol. The police in Summer Bay are pretty useless, to be fair. Haha! Thanks again for commenting!

Thanks KittCatt! Evie's death scene was pretty gruesome but I thought it would be funny if all Leah could see was a teen pregnancy. Evie was obviously do much more ill than just having morning sickness! Lol! Kat is ridiculous in the show so I'm just carrying that through in my story. She's a dodgy cop who thinks she's above the law, while also preaching about justice. I liked the idea that she'll excuse Hunter's psychopathic behaviour just because of her dislike of his mother and his sudden urge to scrub Alf's boat. Apparently all you need to do is a spot of cleaning to get in everyone's good books (if you're Hunter. Not Josh or Andy of course). Anyway, glad you're enjoying it! x

Thanks Kristen Glad you liked it! Andy was a bit silly just rushing in like that when Josh obviously sounded so distressed, but he's not really in his right mind at the moment, lol! Thanks as always for taking the time to comment x

Thanks Jarlie! Much appreciated! Glad you're enjoying the story. Writing psycho Hunter is a lot of fun, lol!

Thanks Pembie! Glad you're enjoying it! The hostage scene was a bit more graphic than I'm used to writing, so I thought I'd better put that warning. I just wanted there to be the most jarring contrast between who Hunter really is and who everyone else is determined to believe he is. After all, 'He's not a bad kid', lol! ...I mean, Hunter might get a little stabby when he's upset but deep down he just wants a hug! So glad you found it funny!

Thank you so much RR1 for the pure joy of getting to watch that sketch. I actually hadn't seen that one so I went and looked it up! Lol. "For he's a jolly good fellow!" I can just see that at Hunter's court case for whatever horrible thing he does next, haha!

Thanks Kristen! Leah just can't see what a psycho Hunter is, neither can Olivia for that matter. Glad you enjoyed it! x

Thanks for the feedback, guys! Glad you enjoyed it! The sad thing is that you're both right! This isn't actually that far fetched compared to the show. I'm writing this as pure farce but the show writers are writing material like this for the actual show! Admittedly, I don't think we'll be seeing torture scenes in the show anytime soon, but there have definitely been conversations like the one between Leah and Roo, where you're sitting there going, 'Seriously?! Don't you hear it?! How big a hypocrite are you?!' I wonder if the actors recognise the hypocrisy of it all and find it funny? They must do, surely!?

Thanks ZacxLeah! Glad you liked it. I think Zac would let Hunter get away with pretty much anything, because he's just a poor messed up kid (and that's obviously Charlotte's fault) All he needs is a little love and understanding. Lol!

Thanks Kristen! Glad you liked it. Hunter's clearly up to no good, lol!

I'm so glad that you found it funny! I wasn't sure how good I'd be at writing comedy, even dark comedy, but I think some of the hypocrisies of the characters in the show are hilarious in themselves. I'm enjoying writing this so much Thanks everybody! x

Thanks Pembie, I would love to write for the show! So so much!!! Although I think I'd take it in a very different direction! Glad you'rd enjoying it. I'm really enjoying writing it!

Interesting reversal of roles in this It's strange to imagine Olivia and VJ together! She's a bit too tough for him I think, and would probably walk all over him. I can see why Hunter would be jealous though

Thanks! Really glad you liked it. You helped inspire it so thanks for that! Lol!

Thanks everyone! Think the show has just gone in such a ridiculous direction with this whole storyline, I just thought it would be fun to take it to its extreme. Psycho Hunter will be a lot of fun to write!

Nice little one shot. Liked how it turned out in the end! So glad Leah chose Zac! What Dan did was a truly terrible thing, especially after what happened with Vinnie. Zac showed that he really cared about her happiness and let her come back to him on her own terms. He could have blown up and attacked Dan, but he's not really that sort, and neither was Dan really. Sad that Dan messed things up for himself so much, but you can't just come back from the dead and expect people to be ok with that (unless you're Brax lol!) Well done x

Great chapter! Poor Zac! that would be pretty scary and having to walk all that way with his wrists tied too! I was surprised that Peter has managed to rope Ryan into this now. I wonder what he got him to do?! Looking forward to the next chapter x

Poor Kyle Feel very sorry for Heath because he'll never get to apologise to him now. He didn't know how much he was probably hurting Kyle with all those stupid names and he can't go back and change it either. It's something he's just going to have to live with. That would be horrible! Still, if Kyle had really thought that Heath didn't love him, I don't think he would have confided in him the way that he did. He obviously trusted him. Heath even stayed with him that night he was so upset. I don't think Kyle really saw him as a bully even if he did call him hurtful names. Looking forward to the next chapter. x

Thanks Suzza! Glad you enjoyed it too! I really appreciate all the support! No idea what I'll write about for the next one but I think I need to give my brain a bit of a break for a little while! I'm frazzled! lol!

Thanks KittCatt and Red Ranger 1! I really appreciate the feedback! So glad you both liked it. I thought Kyle deserved to find a bit of peace after everything he's been through so I went with the warm and fuzzy ending! It needed it after all the misery! I thought it would be nice for Kyle to finally have that sense that he belongs somewhere. That he has someone! I wanted him to remember them a little bit, and to realise that they really were his family, and that they loved him. Remembering some of his Italian would have been a shock to him but I imagine that little bits might come back to him as time goes on. Nico's guilt is understandable too, I think, but he's wrong to feel that way. It's not his fault. They both probably have a bit resentment towards each other for different reasons, but I think in the end, as RR1 says, they see that they've each suffered in their own ways. I wanted Heath and the Summers to still have a place in his life though. They were too important to Kyle for him to just throw them away. The name Kyle Summers-Innocenti is a mouthful, as Kyle says, but it means a lot of things. He's kept a part of each stage of his life. I've really enjoyed writing this but I actually feel emotionally exhausted and a bit frazzled! I've cried writing this sometimes RR1, so I'm glad it moved you too Thanks so much for the lovely words! xxx

Thanks Kristen and Jarlie! Glad you both enjoyed it! I thought it would be nice if the two families could get along. The Summers are very important to Kyle and he wasn't just going to forget about them when he found his real family. I liked the idea that they'd actually like each other enough to socialise together. The Summers wouldn't know anyone in the Bay so it would be nice if they had the Innocenti (even if they do live in the city) to do things with. Also, they're all such lovely people, who all love Kyle, so why wouldn't they get along?! Lol! Again, thank you both so much for all your support x

So Kyle would have been just marginally older than Casey then, but obviously he didn't know that. In my story he was also a bit of a genius, it seems, as he did well in his HSC despite doing it when he was at most 16, and having come from a point of illiteracy. (In my story he was held back when he started school, to afford him some remedial teaching. In my mind, he caught up and actually ended up excelling). Then Danny Braxton got his nasty claws in, and everything went wrong from there.